Hi Carlos,
Sorry, I couldn't open any of your roughs, they are in the wrong file format.
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- Fri Sep 20, 2024 11:27 am
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1 Preliminary Critique
- Replies: 3
- Views: 28
- Tue Sep 17, 2024 12:59 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 01 Preliminary
- Replies: 8
- Views: 47
Re: Project 01 Preliminary
Hi Breanna, I like both of your designs and I like your theme choice, however, I like the second layout better. I like your color choice and the gradient you used works really well to accentuate the stars, and the whole design, to me, just pops and catches your attention. Plus, I think the second la...
- Tue Sep 17, 2024 12:49 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1 Prelim
- Replies: 8
- Views: 50
Re: Project 1 Prelim
Hi Alexis, Both of your designs are good, they are very similar, but I like the second layout better. The color palette you chose works well and contrasts nicely, and your choice of fonts seems to fit the overall motif. I like the second design better because I think it is a little less busy, and th...
- Mon Sep 16, 2024 4:36 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Proj. 01 Prelim
- Replies: 10
- Views: 63
Re: Proj. 01 Prelim
Hi Anastasia, I just love these layouts, but the first layout I found to be the most eye-catching. I think the color scheme is just right and provides the perfect contrast. The fonts you have chosen fit well and add to the overall look of the design. I was going to suggest that you align the text be...
- Mon Sep 16, 2024 4:27 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project_1_preliminary
- Replies: 7
- Views: 52
Re: Project_1_preliminary
Hi Miguel, I really like your layouts, I think the second layout is the better of the 2. It is sectioned really well, your color scheme is perfect and I like your shield and pencil sword logo is cool. Adding your drawings is a nice touch to it and binds the whole thing together. I can find nothing w...
- Mon Sep 16, 2024 4:05 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project One Preliminary Critique
- Replies: 10
- Views: 72
Re: Project One Preliminary Critique
Hi Shasta,
I definitely like the first layout. It is well-sectioned, color-coordinated nicely, professional, and with a little bit of whimsy. However, I think maybe the navigation text could be a little darker with maybe some kind of border around each word. Just a thought.
I definitely like the first layout. It is well-sectioned, color-coordinated nicely, professional, and with a little bit of whimsy. However, I think maybe the navigation text could be a little darker with maybe some kind of border around each word. Just a thought.
- Mon Sep 16, 2024 3:50 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1 Preliminary
- Replies: 8
- Views: 73
Re: Project 1 Preliminary
Hi Rena, I like both of your designs, but of the two I prefer the second design. I think the colors are nice and happy and work well with the overall layout. the second layout seems to be more contemporary and the flower design around the headshot is very appealing. the only thing I could suggest is...
- Mon Sep 16, 2024 3:44 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 01 Prelim
- Replies: 8
- Views: 72
Re: Project 01 Prelim
Hi Percy,
I love both of your layouts but I prefer the corkboard layout the best, it is fun, and fanciful, and portrays a youthful spirit. The one thing I think could be changed is your font choice. I think something a little more readable would be better. Just my opinion.
I love both of your layouts but I prefer the corkboard layout the best, it is fun, and fanciful, and portrays a youthful spirit. The one thing I think could be changed is your font choice. I think something a little more readable would be better. Just my opinion.
- Sun Sep 15, 2024 1:09 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project01 Prelim
- Replies: 9
- Views: 59
Re: Project01 Prelim
Hi Rebekah, I think both designs are very well done, but I like the second design better though. You said you are going for the minimalist look and the second design achieves this. the color palette is very well done, the layout is professional-looking without being ostentatious. The headline Font i...
- Sun Sep 15, 2024 12:55 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project01 preliminary
- Replies: 9
- Views: 83
Re: Project01 preliminary
Hi Chloe, Both of your designs are really good, but for me, I like the Purple theme. It seems a little more fun to me, the use of colors is really good and contrasts well, the split background with contrasting colors I think works well and brings out your headshot. I like your use of file folders fo...