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by shasta_the_masta
Thu Sep 19, 2024 2:50 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: project1-prelim-critique-fall2024
Replies: 7
Views: 83

Re: project1-prelim-critique-fall2024

David, If I were you, I’d start by having some sort of a block layout as the basis of your design. Using grids will help you a lot. Everything looks like it is placed randomly on the page with tons of empty space, and I think the first place for you to start is by aligning a few things horizontally ...
by shasta_the_masta
Thu Sep 19, 2024 2:50 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project One Prelim Work
Replies: 8
Views: 46

Re: Project One Prelim Work

Kimberly, I like the colors and contrast. I also love your initials at the top-center of the page. The first desktop design speaks to me more because there is more breathing room, and it seems more friendly. Also, be careful if you end up justifying the body copy on both sides because you could end ...
by shasta_the_masta
Thu Sep 19, 2024 2:49 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 01 Prelim
Replies: 7
Views: 47

Re: Project 01 Prelim

Tyler, I like the colors of the first design and the layout of the second design. I also think that your wonderful rabbit illustration should not be covered up. I think you should bring that rabbit into the foreground of your layout, and you can either: Leave the background a solid color, or Add a l...
by shasta_the_masta
Thu Sep 19, 2024 2:46 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Preliminary
Replies: 7
Views: 55

Re: Project 1 Preliminary

Hannah, I love the colors and imagery of the second layout, but the first layout suits the dark, muted tones of the image better. I think the first one would be a better fit. In your mobile design, I would keep all the body copy aligned to the left, as opposed to the center, because it’s easier to r...
by shasta_the_masta
Thu Sep 19, 2024 2:45 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project One Preliminary Critique
Replies: 9
Views: 69

Re: Project One Preliminary Critique

Luke, I think the second one is more interesting and fun. However, the left side and the right side of the screen look like two completely different designs. I would say to incorporate that same yellow color from your name into the notebook somewhere and make it a little more cohesive. For your plac...
by shasta_the_masta
Thu Sep 19, 2024 2:44 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project01 preliminary
Replies: 9
Views: 85

Re: Project01 preliminary

Chloe, I love the dark themes you used. I like all the typefaces you used, but I LOVE the curly font in the purple theme which has your greeting and name. I agree with Michael that you can use the white TMCC logo instead of the green, unless you use the eyedropper to pick the green TMCC color and in...
by shasta_the_masta
Thu Sep 19, 2024 2:43 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Preliminary
Replies: 8
Views: 78

Re: Project 1 Preliminary

Serena, I think the first one works better because it looks like the layout colors were pulled from the image, which is more visually appealing. I also love the typeface you used for the body copy. If you do choose the first design, for the mobile version, you should stack the body copy below the im...
by shasta_the_masta
Thu Sep 19, 2024 2:42 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 01 Prelim
Replies: 8
Views: 72

Re: Project 01 Prelim

Percy, These are great! I’m curious to see how the coding will work for these, especially in the bulletin board layout, because of the rotated text boxes. I like the bulletin board design, but you can definitely add more “fun” to it. For example, by adding a fake poster or a picture of a pet or some...
by shasta_the_masta
Thu Sep 19, 2024 2:41 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project01 Prelim
Replies: 9
Views: 120

Re: Project01 Prelim

Emily, These have really fun themes to them. I like how each one is equally colorful and the fonts and shapes work well together. If I had to choose, I would pick the second one because it is nostalgic and goofy. One thing to improve: don’t be afraid to make the mobile screen taller in order to make...
by shasta_the_masta
Thu Sep 19, 2024 2:40 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project_1_preliminary
Replies: 8
Views: 56

Re: Project_1_preliminary

Miguel, I love the concept of the first design, but the colors and fonts clash a bit. I think if you really wanted to do a sketchbook theme, maybe abandon the chalkboard font. It just reminds me too much of an elementary school brochure. And maybe try replacing the vivid colors at the top with color...