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by rebekah_stevenson
Thu Sep 19, 2024 10:29 am
Forum: Project One
Topic: project1-prelim-critique-fall2024
Replies: 7
Views: 83

Re: project1-prelim-critique-fall2024

Hi David,

You did a great job! I like the use of color and shape in your navigation. I like the first one the best because it's easier to read the type.

Great job,
Rebekah
by rebekah_stevenson
Thu Sep 19, 2024 10:25 am
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 01 Prelim
Replies: 7
Views: 44

Re: Project 01 Prelim

Hi Tyler,

I really like your first design. It's clean and simple. I like your colors and the contrast between the background colors and the pictures. I like the shapes and the ways you use shapes to create frames in your second design.

Great Job,
Rebekah
by rebekah_stevenson
Thu Sep 19, 2024 10:22 am
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project One Prelim Work
Replies: 8
Views: 46

Re: Project One Prelim Work

Hi Kimberly, I like both of your designs! I like the shapes and the shape sizes you used in the first one. The balance could be worked one but it is good. The second design has good use of color and I really like where you placed the orange headers. It's clean and easy to see what's happening. It is...
by rebekah_stevenson
Thu Sep 19, 2024 10:15 am
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Preliminary
Replies: 7
Views: 52

Re: Project 1 Preliminary

Hi Hannah, I really like your first design. You’ve created a border to hold in your name and bio. The black background ties in with your black shirt. I really like the variation in type and how it is all still legible. Your second design has a lot of potential but the middle feels a little closed of...
by rebekah_stevenson
Thu Sep 19, 2024 10:08 am
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project One Preliminary Critique
Replies: 9
Views: 68

Re: Project One Preliminary Critique

Hi Luke, Nice designs! The colors in the first one seem a little out of place. Maybe use the colors in your photo as a reference for your background colors but play with the light and darks of those colors. Great picture and great font. The second one is a very cool concept. Everything has a place a...
by rebekah_stevenson
Thu Sep 19, 2024 10:03 am
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project01 preliminary
Replies: 9
Views: 83

Re: Project01 preliminary

Hi Chole, You have great designs. The first has a good use of different shapes and a variation of complimentary colors. The second one has a good use of unity with the icons being the same color. The forest one is a little dark and the purple boxes blend in the background. I would suggest using a li...
by rebekah_stevenson
Thu Sep 19, 2024 9:58 am
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Preliminary
Replies: 8
Views: 74

Re: Project 1 Preliminary

Hi Rena, I like your designs! I really like your first design. The shape in the back really helps ground the whole design. The header is very clean and easy to navigate. And I like how you use the colors from your picture throughout your design. Really brings it all together. I would suggest shiftin...
by rebekah_stevenson
Thu Sep 19, 2024 9:42 am
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 01 Prelim
Replies: 8
Views: 72

Re: Project 01 Prelim

Hi Percy,

I really like these ideas. Very different from what I've seen. I really like the first design! I like the shapes, and depth and the way you separated each of the elements with the ‘sticky notes’.

Great job, very creative,
Rebekah
by rebekah_stevenson
Thu Sep 19, 2024 9:39 am
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project01 Prelim
Replies: 9
Views: 120

Re: Project01 Prelim

Hi Emily, I really like your first design. I like the use of shape and the way you used boxes to outline your resources and projects. I really like the way your name jumps off the page. And I like the use of color. The second design is very bright and fun but slightly overwhelming. I like how you us...
by rebekah_stevenson
Thu Sep 19, 2024 9:34 am
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project_1_preliminary
Replies: 7
Views: 55

Re: Project_1_preliminary

Hi Miguel, Your first design looks very cool and shows who you are, is personalized, and is easy to navigate. Your second one is very mythical and seems less like an intro page. Both are very interesting but I would pursue the first one, and suggest using different colors for your header that match ...