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- Fri Sep 20, 2024 11:46 am
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project One Preliminary Critique
- Replies: 10
- Views: 69
Re: Project One Preliminary Critique
Hey Shasta! I think I prefer your first design, but not by much. The second design is still good, it just looks a little bit more like a pamphlet than a website. The first design has good font choices and a good use of space. The main thing that I would work on is the colors and the layout of your m...
- Fri Sep 20, 2024 11:40 am
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project01 Prelim
- Replies: 9
- Views: 59
Re: Project01 Prelim
Hey Rebekah! I think I like the first design the most. I like how you have laid out the page. I like the picture you've chosen for the background. For the most part, I like the fonts that you have chosen to use. I think that you may need to narrow your fonts down to just 1 or 2. The cursive font is ...
- Fri Sep 20, 2024 11:32 am
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1 Prelim DR
- Replies: 10
- Views: 44
Re: Project 1 Prelim DR
Hey Dani! I like your website! I like the fonts you have chosen to use. I like the custom art that you added. I like your logo. I think that the website is well laid out. The only thing I want more of from this website is color. I think that using small splashes of a bold color could really help to ...
- Fri Sep 20, 2024 11:27 am
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project01 Preliminary Work
- Replies: 9
- Views: 57
Re: Project01 Preliminary Work
Hey Lucio! I like your first design the most. I think it is laid out in a simple, yet effective way. I like the colors that you have chosen to use. Using shades of the same color is a really smart idea. I also like your little logo guy above your name! The main thing I would change is adding the bac...
- Fri Sep 20, 2024 11:17 am
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Proj. 01 Prelim
- Replies: 10
- Views: 59
Re: Proj. 01 Prelim
Hey Anastasia! Cute Cat! I think that the second design is more interesting and better laid out. I like the bright blue color. I like the fonts that you chose to use. I like how you added spots for fake ads. If I could do anything differently, I would add more navigational buttons to the mobile vers...
- Fri Sep 20, 2024 11:13 am
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project_1_preliminary
- Replies: 7
- Views: 51
Re: Project_1_preliminary
Hey Miguel! I like both of your website designs, but I think that your second one is more interesting. I like how you presented your name above your logo. I like the splashes of color that you added to the top of the website. The main thing I would fix is the font. I think that the text in your navi...
- Fri Sep 20, 2024 8:45 am
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project01 Prelim
- Replies: 9
- Views: 118
Re: Project01 Prelim
Hey Emily! I like both of your designs, but I think that the first one is more interesting. I like the colors and fonts that you chose. I think that the main thing you would have to work on is adding navigational buttons to the page somewhere. Both of your designs have an old internet vibe that I am...
- Fri Sep 20, 2024 8:35 am
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 01 Prelim
- Replies: 8
- Views: 71
Re: Project 01 Prelim
Hey Percy! I really like both of your designs. One of them feels very analogue and the other feels very digital. I think that your use of fonts for both designs are good. I think you should stick with the corkboard design because the desktop design feels a little busy. The main thing i would fix on ...
- Fri Sep 20, 2024 8:30 am
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1 Preliminary
- Replies: 8
- Views: 73
Re: Project 1 Preliminary
Hey Rena! I like the use of bright colors in your second design. I think that the second design has a lot of cool shapes. I think that the font you picked for that design works really well to support the fun vibe of the site. I think that the main thing you need to work on is filling up the space. I...
- Fri Sep 20, 2024 8:25 am
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project01 preliminary
- Replies: 9
- Views: 82
Re: Project01 preliminary
Hey Chloe! I like your first design the most. I think that the forest in the background is a good touch. It really helps to set a unique mood for your website. I also like that your picture is so big and fills up the space nicely. I think you may need to make your body text a bit bigger. As it is ri...