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- Tue Sep 17, 2024 9:05 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Proj. 01 Prelim
- Replies: 10
- Views: 59
Re: Proj. 01 Prelim
Hello Anastasia! I love the cat!!! Both designs are well thought out and professional. If I were to pick, it would be the second IMO because the "profile" gives you something you see to scroll down to as the first layout to me seems sort of like a dead end? If you prefer the first, I would...
- Tue Sep 17, 2024 9:02 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project_1_preliminary
- Replies: 7
- Views: 51
Re: Project_1_preliminary
Hi Miguel!
Both are superb, but my favorite is the first!
The first layout feels more cohesive and like a journey. Very well designed!
The top banner sort of clashes though. It is your portfolio, and personally I would like to see the image and headline closer in size.
Both are superb, but my favorite is the first!
The first layout feels more cohesive and like a journey. Very well designed!
The top banner sort of clashes though. It is your portfolio, and personally I would like to see the image and headline closer in size.
- Tue Sep 17, 2024 8:59 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1 Prelim
- Replies: 8
- Views: 50
Re: Project 1 Prelim
Hi Alexis.
Both layouts have a strong vibe to them. If I was viewing your page it would feel like im enclosed, floating in space...like an experience? Thats really good!
I think you just have to play with shapes and hierarchies more to create your best site!
Both layouts have a strong vibe to them. If I was viewing your page it would feel like im enclosed, floating in space...like an experience? Thats really good!
I think you just have to play with shapes and hierarchies more to create your best site!
- Tue Sep 17, 2024 8:57 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 01 Preliminary
- Replies: 8
- Views: 46
Re: Project 01 Preliminary
Hello Breanna
Both of your colors are very nice. The layout two is my favorite, and I enjoy the more professional photo over the selfie. Great job
Both of your colors are very nice. The layout two is my favorite, and I enjoy the more professional photo over the selfie. Great job
- Fri Sep 13, 2024 10:05 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: project1-prelim-critique-fall2024
- Replies: 7
- Views: 83
Re: project1-prelim-critique-fall2024
Hi david! Its preliminary. I need to see peoples designs before I judge my own. Your roughs are well done and thought out. I see you have a very clear idea but might want more time to do a final drawing of it. The reddish pink design has clear navigation done in an interest intriguing way. Personall...
- Fri Sep 13, 2024 10:00 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project01 Prelim
- Replies: 9
- Views: 118
Re: Project01 Prelim
Hi Emily. All of the prelims I have seen you do are always extraordinarily well done and this stays with the trend. You used tonnes of research and explained your ideas well. I like the purplely/blue web layout, but for both, your second design works better. All I could add is that you might want to...
- Fri Sep 13, 2024 9:56 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project One Preliminary Critique
- Replies: 10
- Views: 70
Re: Project One Preliminary Critique
My favorite of the two is the pink design. With the webpage, my eye has a very clear movement around the page which gives me places to look. Your other design is well laid out but im just not sure exactly where to look. The mobile pink is better too in my opinion, but you could try to add more eleme...
- Fri Sep 13, 2024 9:53 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 01 Prelim
- Replies: 8
- Views: 71
Re: Project 01 Prelim
Hi Percy! Both are very very well done! I honestly am having a hard time choosing, but with that current photo, the first design fits better. Maybe a more colorful photo would fit the second and make it work super well. Your second design makes me hear happy beeping of a robot, and it looks alive. I...
- Fri Sep 13, 2024 9:49 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1 Preliminary
- Replies: 8
- Views: 73
Re: Project 1 Preliminary
Hi Serena! I like the first design most. Going off of your style in the photo, the colors suit your personality more. BUT taking from the second, what would make the design pop is having a secondary larger image of something, or a preview of your work below. Then you could crop in the photo, or use ...
- Fri Sep 13, 2024 9:46 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project01 Prelim
- Replies: 9
- Views: 59
Re: Project01 Prelim
Hi Rebekah! Both layouts are very well done! I like the first, with the large lavender! It is a pretty photo, but with the desaturated image it acts as whitespace. Keeping the same everything else, I think moving your paragraph over that photo would bring your design to the next level. super well do...