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by bumblebre
Fri Sep 20, 2024 9:36 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project01 Preliminary Work
Replies: 9
Views: 57

Re: Project01 Preliminary Work

Hi Lucio! First of all, I love your designs! In regards to typography suggestions, I think you could try using a more cartoon-looking font for your name to match your graphic, and then try to find a font that compliments it for your body paragraph and headers! Layout-wise, I love your second design'...
by bumblebre
Fri Sep 20, 2024 9:26 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Prelim DR
Replies: 10
Views: 42

Re: Project 1 Prelim DR

Hi Dani!

First of all: your work is impressive! I enjoy the self-portrait, or what I assume is a self-portrait, because it shows off your style!
Your fonts are cohesive and everything works well together. I do wish, however, that there was some more color to it!

Thank you for sharing!
by bumblebre
Fri Sep 20, 2024 9:18 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project One Preliminary Critique
Replies: 10
Views: 68

Re: Project One Preliminary Critique

Hi Shasta! I love your designs! Your headshots match the coloring and vibe of your designs which makes it all flow nicely! My favorite is the design with a background image, but your first design is also super clean! Everything is organized nicely. I personally don't know what you could change to ma...
by bumblebre
Fri Sep 20, 2024 9:03 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project One Preliminary Critique
Replies: 8
Views: 64

Re: Project One Preliminary Critique

Hi Luke! I personally enjoy the notebook design the best! But you're missing an image. You could have it in place of the sticky note with the question mark. For your first design, I think the Work and Fun texts in the mobile version should be the same as the computer version. Overall, your designs a...
by bumblebre
Fri Sep 20, 2024 6:28 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project01 Prelim
Replies: 9
Views: 58

Re: Project01 Prelim

Hi Rebekah! I like the color palettes you picked! I especially like your second design and how you translated it into the mobile format. Both layouts work well! The only thing I would fix for your first design is the color of your buttons, they blend into the lavender image. For both designs, I thin...
by bumblebre
Sat Sep 14, 2024 1:34 am
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 01 Preliminary
Replies: 8
Views: 46

Project 01 Preliminary

Hi! I know how late this is, but I wanted to share it anyway. For my designs, I went with the sun and moon. My first design is the moon and stars and is very cutesy. My second design is the sun and is more simple. In the future I may try more of a modern sleek look, but for now I took the fun route!...
by bumblebre
Fri Sep 13, 2024 8:38 pm
Forum: Introductions
Topic: Introducing Bre...
Replies: 0
Views: 30

Introducing Bre...

Hello Everyone! My Name is Breanna Lumsden or Bre, and this is my second year here at TMCC! I am majoring in both English and Graphic Design! I love creative writing and I have written a science fiction/romance book that I am editing. Graphic Design wise I mainly create work that is based heavily o...