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- Tue Nov 24, 2015 7:11 pm
- Forum: Project Four
- Topic: pr3 prelim
- Replies: 10
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Re: pr3 prelim
Both designs could work. I like the layout of both with the navigation in the middle; though I’m not sure how noticeable it’ll be in the first one (personally I like the circles). I like in the second one that you incorporated the tmcc mountain into the background. For the first I would put transpar...
- Tue Nov 24, 2015 7:04 pm
- Forum: Project Four
- Topic: Project 3 Prelim
- Replies: 16
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Re: Project 3 Prelim
I think both of your designs work but my favorite is the top design, I really like the page ripped out look. For the top design I would move down the tmcc logo to line up with the footer. Great start though.
- Tue Nov 24, 2015 6:57 pm
- Forum: Project Four
- Topic: roughs for project 3
- Replies: 16
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Re: roughs for project 3
I really like both designs. I like the computer since we use them so much in our program (the galaxy background on the screens really pretty). Maybe change the white body copy to black though it gets kinda hard to read in a few spots. I second one shows a little bit more of tmcc with allllll the gre...
- Tue Nov 24, 2015 6:46 pm
- Forum: Project Four
- Topic: Preliminary Critique #3
- Replies: 14
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Re: Preliminary Critique #3
I like how simple both of your designs are. For the first design, I like the overlap in the images but the significance of the hand holding a clock is a little lost on me; maybe a hand holding a pencil or a mouse or a supply we use to make designs with. I really like your plan to make a different on...
- Tue Nov 24, 2015 6:19 pm
- Forum: Project Four
- Topic: prelim_#3
- Replies: 15
- Views: 3350
Re: prelim_#3
I like your first design better, though both could work. I like how simple the first design is, though with how bright the city scape it’s a little hard to read the black type. If you go with this one; maybe upping the opacity of the box behind it would work, I would also change the dark grey to tmc...
- Wed Nov 18, 2015 5:28 pm
- Forum: Project Four
- Topic: Project 3 prelim
- Replies: 16
- Views: 3518
Re: Project 3 prelim
I like the circles in both of your designs, not a fan of the polka dots or the saturation and brightness of the blue, red and green design (its a bit much for me). I think the black, green, and white better represents TMCC as far as color but I think with all the colors the blue, red and green would...
- Wed Nov 18, 2015 5:28 pm
- Forum: Project Four
- Topic: Preliminary Critique for Project#3
- Replies: 16
- Views: 3479
Re: Preliminary Critique for Project#3
I really like both of your designs. They're extremely crisp and professional looking, while still clearly representing tmcc rather than any ol' college. The only comment I have is on rough1 (going with your naming of the actual files, so the bottom design) there's a white strip in between the green ...
- Wed Nov 18, 2015 5:25 pm
- Forum: Project Four
- Topic: Project3 preliminary work
- Replies: 15
- Views: 3325
Re: Project3 preliminary work
I really like the folder idea on rough1 but I'm not a fan of the colors of them or the texture on the green background. For rough2 I really like the geometric shapes, I would move the nav to the top though just because that's where I'd expect it to be. Amazing start though.
- Wed Nov 18, 2015 5:22 pm
- Forum: Project Four
- Topic: Project 3 Prelim Critique
- Replies: 14
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Re: Project 3 Prelim Critique
The colors are a bit too bright and saturated for me on the home1 its much better with the black (I would change the blue outline on home2 to black if you choose it), having said that, I like the layout of home1 better. For the home2 design, I would go with a green tmcc logo, the white is really dis...
- Wed Nov 18, 2015 1:11 pm
- Forum: Project Four
- Topic: your thoughts? prelim
- Replies: 16
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your thoughts? prelim
I plan on having j query animation for the folders, the paper and picture will come out of the folders then the paper will go on top of the folder and then both swipe sideways off of the screen. And for the background picture one, the navigation is the parts of wizard the lizard picture.