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by papasmurf124
Fri Nov 20, 2015 9:46 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Projetc #3 - Preliminary Critique
Replies: 15
Views: 3283

Re: Projetc #3 - Preliminary Critique

Wow Great concepts. I might have to barrow one lol jk. Cant wait to see the final product from either one.
by papasmurf124
Fri Nov 20, 2015 9:43 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Project3 preliminary work
Replies: 15
Views: 3155

Re: Project3 preliminary work

I like the bottom two. Try to put the text at an angle in some of those blocks. See if that works better.
by papasmurf124
Fri Nov 20, 2015 9:39 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: your thoughts? prelim
Replies: 16
Views: 3149

Re: your thoughts? prelim

Go with the folder one. Try to separate the grc portion at the top too much green.
by papasmurf124
Fri Nov 20, 2015 9:34 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: prelim Three
Replies: 16
Views: 3436

Re: prelim Three

Nice Ink. I think you should try a nav in waves on the second page rather than a series of 6 pages.
by papasmurf124
Fri Nov 20, 2015 9:29 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Project 3 Prelim
Replies: 14
Views: 2969

Re: Project 3 Prelim

I like ver2. The only thing I would change is not moving the logo from page to page.
by papasmurf124
Fri Nov 20, 2015 9:25 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Project 3 Preliminary
Replies: 15
Views: 3182

Re: Project 3 Preliminary

Extremely vivid and bright perfect. This is what your in for in the grc program: After two minutes i had a head ach...lol. I would go with the top one Just dull it down a bit.
by papasmurf124
Fri Nov 20, 2015 9:22 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Preliminary Critique #3
Replies: 14
Views: 2910

Re: Preliminary Critique #3

I feel like it's time to get off my ass and go to college is a great idea; nice psych effect. I'd go with that one. Just blow up the logo and makit it fit more in the ^ of the hands. That will press the Tmcc idea more... No Green.....
by papasmurf124
Fri Nov 20, 2015 9:13 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Preliminary Critique for Project#3
Replies: 16
Views: 3250

Re: Preliminary Critique for Project#3

I like Rough 1. It is direct. Rough 2 would take to long I still like the 3 click rule. Your final will look amazing I'm sure.
by papasmurf124
Fri Nov 20, 2015 9:07 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: roughs for project 3
Replies: 16
Views: 3131

Re: roughs for project 3

It's hard to pick. The top one is clean; not sure how your text box will build in dreamweaver. The bottom is totally Tmcc but there's to much going on.

Try putting the buttons on the pc as perspective png's and the bosy copy on the left. Then you click in the computer of the computer...
by papasmurf124
Fri Nov 20, 2015 9:00 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Project 3 Prelim
Replies: 16
Views: 3349

Re: Project 3 Prelim

I like the torn paper one as well. I think you should keep the envelope tab in both for continuity though.