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by anayaestevan
Wed Oct 10, 2018 5:59 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project one Final
Replies: 18
Views: 3534

Re: Project one Final

Tandy,

Designs are greatly improved here. I like the neutral color scheme. And fonts work here.

Alignments on the desktop version are bugging me. Clean those up and I think you're good!
by anayaestevan
Wed Oct 10, 2018 5:57 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Final
Replies: 17
Views: 3227

Re: Project 1 Final

I like the unity here! Retro arcade theme is very cool. 8 bit social media icons are awesome.

The title text seems a little boring compared to the text above the arcade machine. I would like much more detail in your coin and arcade machine. Fully rendered illustrations would be sick. Good luck.
by anayaestevan
Wed Oct 10, 2018 5:55 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 FINAL !!
Replies: 20
Views: 3967

Re: Project 1 FINAL !!

A1 design here.

I love the negative space between the logo and the banner so your eyes know exactly where to go. Color scheme is great and fonts are very creative. I can't find anything I don't like. Great job!
by anayaestevan
Wed Oct 10, 2018 5:53 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: project I final / Agostina Renaud
Replies: 18
Views: 3180

Re: project I final / Agostina Renaud

Really good stuff here! I like the aesthetic. Very 1910's WW1 feel. Maybe that's just me. I think you could push the letter theme further. Maybe use a typewriter font? Play around with the flower to make it look older or lower quality to really push the vintage thing? Excited to see where this goes.
by anayaestevan
Wed Oct 10, 2018 5:50 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project one final
Replies: 19
Views: 3495

Re: Project one final

Tony,

Great work my guy. This is really clean and cool looking. Font works very well reminds me of Louis Vuitton. Is there a tutorial I can find for how to do this?
by anayaestevan
Wed Oct 10, 2018 5:23 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Final Design
Replies: 19
Views: 3425

Re: Final Design

Design has been reduced and simplified to success. Much better.

Still think fonts could be a little more interesting. Overall very dark. Maybe add some off the white from the image?
by anayaestevan
Wed Oct 10, 2018 5:20 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project01-Final-Layout01
Replies: 19
Views: 3544

Re: Project01-Final-Layout01

Matt,

Aesthetic is really cool. I like washed out 3d. Very unique. Layout is fine, and fonts all work for me.

Imo, it doesn't really pop. A drop shadow might help with this, or maybe a glow of some kind.
by anayaestevan
Wed Oct 10, 2018 5:18 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Final
Replies: 18
Views: 3107

Re: Project 1 Final

Stacy,

These are amazing! Really great design here.

Your fonts and the lower case lend well to your layout. Everything is easy to read and easy to follow. Navigation is clear and concise. Great work!
by anayaestevan
Wed Oct 10, 2018 5:09 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: project_one_final_sjones
Replies: 17
Views: 3268

Re: project_one_final_sjones

Great stuff here.

I like all the changes you made. Color schemes and illustrations are nice and lend themselves well to your design.

Be careful with alignments and type justification. In your desktop layout, the text is broken up strangely. Mobile design looks slightly off to the left.
by anayaestevan
Wed Oct 10, 2018 5:07 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Final!!
Replies: 18
Views: 3244

Re: Final!!

Courtney,

Some great headway has been made here. Much cleaner and illustrations look fully rendered. Color scheme is great as well.

I think there's a lot more to add here. I think a a little bit more will go a long way. The text for your nav is a little big imo.

Good job