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- Tue Oct 30, 2018 6:35 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project 2 Preliminary Worky Works
- Replies: 16
- Views: 3130
Re: Project 2 Preliminary Worky Works
I’m the most drawn to your second layout! The vintagey colors of the image go really well with the type you chose. If you go with that one, you might want to align your navigation buttons with your paragraph box. I also really like the image and the type of your fourth layout. Your type kinda gets l...
- Tue Oct 30, 2018 1:07 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project 2 Rough
- Replies: 17
- Views: 3795
Re: Project 2 Rough
I’m liking both of your designs! I really like your menu page on your second design with the beers in the background. The bricks in your first design give off a bar/pub vibe, but I think you could add pictures to express more of that. Also the font you used for the logo is really nice. Looking forwa...
- Tue Oct 30, 2018 1:00 am
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project 2 Roughs
- Replies: 14
- Views: 3140
Re: Project 2 Roughs
I think your first layout works the best with the product! The white background adds a balance to the colorfulness of the jello, and the fonts you chose are fun and go well with everything. I don’t know how I feel about the transparent gray background, it seems to take away from the colorful theme. ...
- Tue Oct 30, 2018 12:21 am
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Naked Roughs for project 2!!
- Replies: 16
- Views: 3709
Re: Naked Roughs for project 2!!
I like your art style, however these don’t really express massage therapist to me. I feel like I’m on a completely different kind of website... and I don’t know how I got there. I understand that it’s a nudest massage therapist, but I think the nudity could be a little more subtle and more emphasis ...
- Fri Oct 26, 2018 2:09 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project 2 Jason, Big DaDdy
- Replies: 14
- Views: 2860
Re: Project 2 Jason, Big DaDdy
Man, the website you chose is just... ew. And their logo is going to give me nightmares. But your designs are a huge improvement, and they definitely add class to their business. I’m most drawn to your first concept since it conveys what the website is about a bit better. Plus it looks like you’re p...
- Fri Oct 26, 2018 1:21 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: project 2 prelim
- Replies: 17
- Views: 3522
Re: project 2 prelim
Both of your designs are a huge improvement from the original! I really like your second layout and the image that you used. The colors are pretty, it’s clear what the website is about, and using the top of the stain glass for your second pages was a really nice touch. My only suggestion is to make ...
- Fri Oct 26, 2018 1:10 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project 2 Prelim
- Replies: 20
- Views: 4392
Re: Project 2 Prelim
These are so clean and pretty! I really love the colors and the soft gradients you used. I think your first design fits a little better for an author’s website. The white bar at the top stands out a little too much in my opinion, so you may consider changing the color. Really nice job!
- Fri Oct 26, 2018 12:51 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Prelim. #2
- Replies: 21
- Views: 4919
Re: Prelim. #2
Ironically the original website makes me want to go blind. These are much easier on the eyes. I really like the icons you used in your first design! I think they could be a bit smaller and made to be about the width and height. Your second design has a nice modern and clean feel to it. The image is ...
- Fri Oct 26, 2018 12:26 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project 2 Preliminary Critique
- Replies: 11
- Views: 3249
Re: Project 2 Preliminary Critique
These are really modern and professional looking! I love both of homepages, but I’m more drawn to your second design with the little characters that you drew. Those are super cute and make me want to look around the website just to see more. My only suggestion is to try a more interesting font on th...
- Wed Oct 24, 2018 11:47 pm
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project 2 Roughs
- Replies: 17
- Views: 3849
Re: Project 2 Roughs
Their website takes minimalism to another level. I really like what you've done with it! I'm drawn the most to your second design. It's still minimalist, but has character to it, especially the homepage. I also really love the way you did the type on the band name! Nice job!