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by kayla.pressburger
Tue Oct 30, 2018 6:35 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2 Preliminary Worky Works
Replies: 16
Views: 3130

Re: Project 2 Preliminary Worky Works

I’m the most drawn to your second layout! The vintagey colors of the image go really well with the type you chose. If you go with that one, you might want to align your navigation buttons with your paragraph box. I also really like the image and the type of your fourth layout. Your type kinda gets l...
by kayla.pressburger
Tue Oct 30, 2018 1:07 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2 Rough
Replies: 17
Views: 3795

Re: Project 2 Rough

I’m liking both of your designs! I really like your menu page on your second design with the beers in the background. The bricks in your first design give off a bar/pub vibe, but I think you could add pictures to express more of that. Also the font you used for the logo is really nice. Looking forwa...
by kayla.pressburger
Tue Oct 30, 2018 1:00 am
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2 Roughs
Replies: 14
Views: 3140

Re: Project 2 Roughs

I think your first layout works the best with the product! The white background adds a balance to the colorfulness of the jello, and the fonts you chose are fun and go well with everything. I don’t know how I feel about the transparent gray background, it seems to take away from the colorful theme. ...
by kayla.pressburger
Tue Oct 30, 2018 12:21 am
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Naked Roughs for project 2!!
Replies: 16
Views: 3709

Re: Naked Roughs for project 2!!

I like your art style, however these don’t really express massage therapist to me. I feel like I’m on a completely different kind of website... and I don’t know how I got there. I understand that it’s a nudest massage therapist, but I think the nudity could be a little more subtle and more emphasis ...
by kayla.pressburger
Fri Oct 26, 2018 2:09 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2 Jason, Big DaDdy
Replies: 14
Views: 2860

Re: Project 2 Jason, Big DaDdy

Man, the website you chose is just... ew. And their logo is going to give me nightmares. But your designs are a huge improvement, and they definitely add class to their business. I’m most drawn to your first concept since it conveys what the website is about a bit better. Plus it looks like you’re p...
by kayla.pressburger
Fri Oct 26, 2018 1:21 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: project 2 prelim
Replies: 17
Views: 3522

Re: project 2 prelim

Both of your designs are a huge improvement from the original! I really like your second layout and the image that you used. The colors are pretty, it’s clear what the website is about, and using the top of the stain glass for your second pages was a really nice touch. My only suggestion is to make ...
by kayla.pressburger
Fri Oct 26, 2018 1:10 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2 Prelim
Replies: 20
Views: 4392

Re: Project 2 Prelim

These are so clean and pretty! I really love the colors and the soft gradients you used. I think your first design fits a little better for an author’s website. The white bar at the top stands out a little too much in my opinion, so you may consider changing the color. Really nice job!
by kayla.pressburger
Fri Oct 26, 2018 12:51 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Prelim. #2
Replies: 21
Views: 4919

Re: Prelim. #2

Ironically the original website makes me want to go blind. These are much easier on the eyes. I really like the icons you used in your first design! I think they could be a bit smaller and made to be about the width and height. Your second design has a nice modern and clean feel to it. The image is ...
by kayla.pressburger
Fri Oct 26, 2018 12:26 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2 Preliminary Critique
Replies: 11
Views: 3249

Re: Project 2 Preliminary Critique

These are really modern and professional looking! I love both of homepages, but I’m more drawn to your second design with the little characters that you drew. Those are super cute and make me want to look around the website just to see more. My only suggestion is to try a more interesting font on th...
by kayla.pressburger
Wed Oct 24, 2018 11:47 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2 Roughs
Replies: 17
Views: 3849

Re: Project 2 Roughs

Their website takes minimalism to another level. I really like what you've done with it! I'm drawn the most to your second design. It's still minimalist, but has character to it, especially the homepage. I also really love the way you did the type on the band name! Nice job!