GRC 175 Learning and Discussion Forum

These are really cool and I think both of your concepts convey the website well! The large amount of body copy on your inner pages is a bit overwhelming and could use some paragraph breaks. I think your second layout is my favorite, as it looks cleaner and more like a report/document. You might try ...

I really love how you have your name written in Japanese and English at the top of your page. It's such a unique touch! Your layout is also really nice, everything has a place and has room to breathe. Maybe you could try your menu without a drop shadow to go with the minimalist design!

I love the background picture you used! It's so calming and nice to look at. I also like the minimalist feel of the designs. Maybe you could put your references link in a box like the projects are?

This design is really, really well done. It's very modern and nice to look at. Definitely one of the best things I've seen from you! Looking forward to seeing the mobile version!

I love how perfectly aligned your layouts are! Everything is so organized and clean, and it all fits together really well. Keep it up!

I love how you made your menu buttons into music notes! You might try leaving out the clarinet(?) picture on the right, as it seems a bit out of place compared to the rest of your design. Maybe place your buttons there instead? Looking forward to seeing your completed website!

You did such a good job on this project! Your layouts flow better than before, and they look even better! Great job.

I like how simple and straightforward your designs are! I also love how you used your background image as a prominent part of your design. It adds just the right amount of color. You might try making your name a little bigger and your menu buttons a little smaller!

I really like the artwork you used as your background, it makes it really unique. My only suggestion is to make the boxes behind your bodycopy the same color. I think the gray on your mobile version looks nicer than the black on your web version. Nice work!

I love your layouts! The sunflower adds a really nice pop of color, and the typeface you used for your name is perfect! Great job!