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- Thu Oct 04, 2018 10:46 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1 Final Versions
- Replies: 17
- Views: 3069
Re: Project 1 Final Versions
Your designs are so interesting to look at! I love how you combined the two designs from your roughs. All of the design elements are balanced really nicely. You might want to pull some of the words closer together on parts of your bodycopy to make it flow better. Other than that, nice job! (:
- Thu Oct 04, 2018 10:34 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: project_one_final_sjones
- Replies: 17
- Views: 3180
Re: project_one_final_sjones
I really love your designs! They're both are clean and simple, while still having style and personality. I also like how you used two different photos for your mobile and computer versions. My only suggestion is to add a space between some of the words and commas, as they look a bit too close. Great...
- Thu Oct 04, 2018 10:24 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1 Final
- Replies: 17
- Views: 3003
Project 1 Final
Hi everyone! Here are my final designs for Project 1. I decided to go with the mountain design, but I changed a few things around. I wanted a bit more color in my design to make it feel less gloomy, so I changed the background image. I also changed the font on my bodycopy and some of the colors to m...
- Wed Sep 19, 2018 1:59 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1
- Replies: 22
- Views: 3806
Re: Project 1
As much as I like the train design, I think the pinball idea is definitely more your style. It really shows off your creativity and personality! I think by creating some depth by adding in some more highlights and shadows will really bring it to life. I can't wait to see what you do with it!
- Mon Sep 17, 2018 12:56 am
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Preliminary Art Work
- Replies: 22
- Views: 3583
Re: Preliminary Art Work
I'm really loving the images you used! My personal favorites are the first two designs. The colors and the layouts are really nice, and I love the textures! Nice job!
- Mon Sep 17, 2018 12:52 am
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1 preliminary
- Replies: 21
- Views: 3336
Re: Project 1 preliminary
I love how your designs reflect your interests! I also really like your background images. You might try using a different color than gray to put your body copy in to make your designs stand out a bit more!
- Mon Sep 17, 2018 12:45 am
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: rough draft project1
- Replies: 21
- Views: 3403
Re: rough draft project1
The artwork you used is very cool! I'm most drawn to your second design, especially the desktop version. I really like the minimalism of it, and I think it would translate well into a mobile version.
- Mon Sep 17, 2018 12:38 am
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: My attempt
- Replies: 21
- Views: 3601
Re: My attempt
I love the art you used in your designs! I prefer the first layout over the second because I think it's a more cohesive design. The font in your body copy seems a bit too thick in comparison to the script font. You may consider changing the fonts around a bit. Overall nice job! (:
- Mon Sep 17, 2018 12:25 am
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: proj. 1
- Replies: 22
- Views: 3586
Re: proj. 1
I'm loving the music theme in your designs! I also really like the little design elements you added in your first design. You might consider playing around with your type and color scheme a bit more!
- Mon Sep 17, 2018 12:14 am
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: project I Roughs
- Replies: 23
- Views: 3766
Re: project I Roughs
I love both of your designs! The typography in the first layout is very well done, and the colors go really nice together! As much as I like your first design, I think your second design works best as a website. The sunflower as a pop of color is so cute!