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- Fri Sep 14, 2018 5:20 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1 Prelim
- Replies: 23
- Views: 4028
Re: Project 1 Prelim
Your layouts are nicely done and I love your style! I also really love the type you used on your name in both of your designs. For your social media icons in your second design, I suggest making them smaller so there's more emphasis on other parts of your design. Nice job, I think either design you ...
- Thu Sep 13, 2018 12:43 am
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project One: Preliminary
- Replies: 21
- Views: 3786
Re: Project One: Preliminary
Your designs are very pretty and colorful! I like how your style shows through and the layouts are nice. On your desktop layouts, I suggest making your paragraph type bigger since it's a bit hard to read. Also in some of your paragraphs, I'd change your tracking on the type so the words aren't as sp...
- Thu Sep 13, 2018 12:19 am
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Sarah's Offerings...
- Replies: 23
- Views: 4075
Re: Sarah's Offerings...
I love the style of your layouts! The line drawings with little hints of color go together really nicely. The mountain and deer(?) skull ones are my favorite. My only suggestion is to make sure your photos have high resolution so they don't get blurry when they're on a desktop.
- Thu Sep 13, 2018 12:02 am
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Roast my website
- Replies: 21
- Views: 3487
Re: Roast my website
Your designs are very modern and tasteful! My favorite is your second design because it's laid out nicely and visually interesting. I like your first design as well, however I feel it's a bit too spaced out. On your desktop version, you might try moving your social media buttons down below the parag...
- Wed Sep 12, 2018 11:49 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Rough roughs for judgment
- Replies: 23
- Views: 3632
Re: Rough roughs for judgment
I like your third layout the best. The gray background with the black and white trees photo go well together! I think a pop of color could look nice as well, but I think the red might be a bit too bright. Maybe you could try softer colors to go with the gray such as a light blue, pink, or beige.
- Wed Sep 12, 2018 11:17 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Preliminary Roughs for Project 1
- Replies: 22
- Views: 3805
Preliminary Roughs for Project 1
Here are my preliminary roughs for project 1. I love minimalism and vintage designs, so I wanted to incorporate a bit of both into my designs. My goal was also to create easy to follow and organized designs for my web pages. Any suggestions to improve or change anything is appreciated. (: Some websi...
- Wed Sep 12, 2018 10:15 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: My roughs have fun!!
- Replies: 23
- Views: 3831
Re: My roughs have fun!!
Your drawings are very cute and express your personality well. From what I can tell, your layout plans seem pretty nice! Looking forward to seeing the final product.
- Wed Sep 12, 2018 10:04 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1 Preliminary Critique
- Replies: 23
- Views: 3579
Re: Project 1 Preliminary Critique
You have a very unique and eye catching illustration style that I love! The typefaces you chose go together very nicely, and the overall layouts are clean and organized. I prefer the first design the best, but the second one is great too. ![Smile :)](./images/smilies/icon_e_smile.gif)
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- Wed Sep 12, 2018 9:56 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 01 roughs
- Replies: 22
- Views: 3701
Re: Project 01 roughs
I like your second design the best! I like how it kinda has a retro vibe to it, and the picture in the background is really cool. Your other designs are nice as well, however you may want to consider playing around with more typefaces to make them stronger designs.
- Wed Sep 12, 2018 9:43 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1 Preliinary Critique
- Replies: 23
- Views: 4398
Re: Project 1 Preliinary Critique
I like both of the ideas for your designs! The ticket design is especially really cool, and I think you could push the concept further. Maybe you could add texture to the tickets to look like paper, or add some ridges on the edges of the tickets.