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by kj923
Mon Sep 17, 2018 3:38 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: My attempt
Replies: 21
Views: 3601

Re: My attempt

Awesome artwork! It really strengthens your design! It could blend into your designs better though. Like maybe if your art work didn’t have a white box around it?
by kj923
Mon Sep 17, 2018 3:35 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Rough roughs for judgment
Replies: 23
Views: 3624

Re: Rough roughs for judgment

I like your mobile designs best! The one without red text, I like that layout a little bit more, but you could totally add some red in there for that pop you’re looking for! Maybe don’t make the text red itself, but rather use red accents in the line work.

Hope I could help!
by kj923
Mon Sep 17, 2018 3:32 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: rough draft project1
Replies: 21
Views: 3403

Re: rough draft project1

I’m a big fan of your art work in all your layouts!! a lot of your text is difficult to read, however. Maybe try using a text box on some or use a dark, bold font instead!
by kj923
Mon Sep 17, 2018 3:29 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Preliminary Critique
Replies: 23
Views: 3577

Re: Project 1 Preliminary Critique

Super unique layout and design! I really like the different color combos! Maybe try blending your art into the layout a little smoother in your first design! Great job so far.
by kj923
Mon Sep 17, 2018 3:27 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Sarah's Offerings...
Replies: 23
Views: 4069

Re: Sarah's Offerings...

Your 1st and 3rd layout are my favs! I have a similar taste in design and really enjoy your work! If anything I would play around with some different fonts and see if anything works better :)
by kj923
Mon Sep 17, 2018 3:21 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Prelim Critique
Replies: 22
Views: 4035

Re: Project 1 Prelim Critique

Very nice color contrast in your designs! Although, they are a little busy, I’m sure with some adjustments you’ll make a clear layout :)
by kj923
Fri Sep 14, 2018 9:53 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project One: Preliminary
Replies: 21
Views: 3784

Re: Project One: Preliminary

Your design layouts are very organized and look like you spent a lot of time on them and put in some hard work! Good job.

I think you could go with either layout, but I especially like your mobile layout with the cloud background! Very cool.
by kj923
Fri Sep 14, 2018 9:46 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: My roughs
Replies: 21
Views: 3697

Re: My roughs

Hey Megan I really like the visuals you used in both your layouts! I would suggest making you font a little bigger in you paragraph and maybe play with your web design layouts some more. I really like your mobile ones though!

Lookin good!!
by kj923
Fri Sep 14, 2018 12:33 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project1-Prelim
Replies: 22
Views: 3910

Re: Project1-Prelim

I like your designs a lot!! The contrast of your picture in your design is great. The only thing I’m not too sure about is the Web layout, I feel like your picture got stretched?
by kj923
Fri Sep 14, 2018 12:30 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 01 roughs
Replies: 22
Views: 3700

Re: Project 01 roughs

Hi Yuri, I like the colors you chose to incorporate into your designs. I would suggest trying out other fonts though! Play around with mixing 2-3 fonts into your favorite design :)

Good luck, can’t wait to see the final draft.