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- Mon Sep 17, 2018 3:38 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: My attempt
- Replies: 21
- Views: 3601
Re: My attempt
Awesome artwork! It really strengthens your design! It could blend into your designs better though. Like maybe if your art work didn’t have a white box around it?
- Mon Sep 17, 2018 3:35 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Rough roughs for judgment
- Replies: 23
- Views: 3624
Re: Rough roughs for judgment
I like your mobile designs best! The one without red text, I like that layout a little bit more, but you could totally add some red in there for that pop you’re looking for! Maybe don’t make the text red itself, but rather use red accents in the line work.
Hope I could help!
Hope I could help!
- Mon Sep 17, 2018 3:32 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: rough draft project1
- Replies: 21
- Views: 3403
Re: rough draft project1
I’m a big fan of your art work in all your layouts!! a lot of your text is difficult to read, however. Maybe try using a text box on some or use a dark, bold font instead!
- Mon Sep 17, 2018 3:29 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1 Preliminary Critique
- Replies: 23
- Views: 3577
Re: Project 1 Preliminary Critique
Super unique layout and design! I really like the different color combos! Maybe try blending your art into the layout a little smoother in your first design! Great job so far.
- Mon Sep 17, 2018 3:27 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Sarah's Offerings...
- Replies: 23
- Views: 4069
Re: Sarah's Offerings...
Your 1st and 3rd layout are my favs! I have a similar taste in design and really enjoy your work! If anything I would play around with some different fonts and see if anything works better
- Mon Sep 17, 2018 3:21 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1 Prelim Critique
- Replies: 22
- Views: 4035
Re: Project 1 Prelim Critique
Very nice color contrast in your designs! Although, they are a little busy, I’m sure with some adjustments you’ll make a clear layout
- Fri Sep 14, 2018 9:53 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project One: Preliminary
- Replies: 21
- Views: 3784
Re: Project One: Preliminary
Your design layouts are very organized and look like you spent a lot of time on them and put in some hard work! Good job.
I think you could go with either layout, but I especially like your mobile layout with the cloud background! Very cool.
I think you could go with either layout, but I especially like your mobile layout with the cloud background! Very cool.
- Fri Sep 14, 2018 9:46 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: My roughs
- Replies: 21
- Views: 3697
Re: My roughs
Hey Megan I really like the visuals you used in both your layouts! I would suggest making you font a little bigger in you paragraph and maybe play with your web design layouts some more. I really like your mobile ones though!
Lookin good!!
Lookin good!!
- Fri Sep 14, 2018 12:33 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project1-Prelim
- Replies: 22
- Views: 3910
Re: Project1-Prelim
I like your designs a lot!! The contrast of your picture in your design is great. The only thing I’m not too sure about is the Web layout, I feel like your picture got stretched?
- Fri Sep 14, 2018 12:30 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 01 roughs
- Replies: 22
- Views: 3700
Re: Project 01 roughs
Hi Yuri, I like the colors you chose to incorporate into your designs. I would suggest trying out other fonts though! Play around with mixing 2-3 fonts into your favorite design
Good luck, can’t wait to see the final draft.
Good luck, can’t wait to see the final draft.