I like the first layout, however they both look very basic. Maybe add some more color or more design elements might improve it.
Hope this helps,
Terri
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- Thu Sep 13, 2018 3:25 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project1-Prelim
- Replies: 22
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- Thu Sep 13, 2018 3:23 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1 Preliminary Critique
- Replies: 23
- Views: 3563
Re: Project 1 Preliminary Critique
I like the one with artist circled. It is very creative and unique.
Hope this helps,
Terri
Hope this helps,
Terri
- Thu Sep 13, 2018 3:20 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: My roughs have fun!!
- Replies: 23
- Views: 3808
Re: My roughs have fun!!
I like the one with the tiger. Your drawings are great, I love them! I hope the final product lives up to this creativity.
Hope this helps,
Terri
Hope this helps,
Terri
- Thu Sep 13, 2018 3:18 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Roast my website
- Replies: 21
- Views: 3472
Re: Roast my website
I really like the darker one. It is very clean cut and looks professional.
Hope this help,
Terri
Hope this help,
Terri
- Thu Sep 13, 2018 3:16 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Sarah's Offerings...
- Replies: 23
- Views: 4059
Re: Sarah's Offerings...
I like the design with the mountains, the images looks so crisp and clean.
Hope this helps,
Terri
Hope this helps,
Terri
- Thu Sep 13, 2018 3:13 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Preliminary Roughs for Project 1
- Replies: 22
- Views: 3793
Re: Preliminary Roughs for Project 1
I really like the one with the mountains. It is light and airy and reminds me of the Sierra Nevadas.
Hope this helps,
Terri
Hope this helps,
Terri
- Thu Sep 13, 2018 3:12 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: My roughs
- Replies: 21
- Views: 3689
Re: My roughs
I like the purple one better. I think that the text for your name needs to be a little bit lighter in color to make it easier to read. Just a thought.
Hope this helps,
Terri
Hope this helps,
Terri
- Thu Sep 13, 2018 3:09 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Preliminary Art Work
- Replies: 22
- Views: 3564
Re: Preliminary Art Work
I kind of feel like your mobile designs and your computer designs don't really work together. The themes are different and they don't look very cohesive.
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Terri
Hope this helps,
Terri
- Thu Sep 13, 2018 3:07 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: My attempt
- Replies: 21
- Views: 3586
Re: My attempt
I like the second design, it seems more streamlined but the text for the menu the line underneath and above kind of makes the menu hard to read. It works for your name but not the menu.
Hope this Helps,
Terri
Hope this Helps,
Terri
- Thu Sep 13, 2018 3:04 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1 preliminary
- Replies: 21
- Views: 3311
Re: Project 1 preliminary
I like the rainbow motif of the first layout but I think you need more of the rainbow colors in the mobile design under it to make the designs work as one.
Hope this helps,
Terri
Hope this helps,
Terri