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by tweetysmurf2350
Thu Sep 13, 2018 3:25 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project1-Prelim
Replies: 22
Views: 3898

Re: Project1-Prelim

I like the first layout, however they both look very basic. Maybe add some more color or more design elements might improve it.

Hope this helps,
Terri
by tweetysmurf2350
Thu Sep 13, 2018 3:23 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Preliminary Critique
Replies: 23
Views: 3563

Re: Project 1 Preliminary Critique

I like the one with artist circled. It is very creative and unique.

Hope this helps,
Terri
by tweetysmurf2350
Thu Sep 13, 2018 3:20 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: My roughs have fun!!
Replies: 23
Views: 3808

Re: My roughs have fun!!

I like the one with the tiger. Your drawings are great, I love them! I hope the final product lives up to this creativity.

Hope this helps,
Terri
by tweetysmurf2350
Thu Sep 13, 2018 3:18 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Roast my website
Replies: 21
Views: 3472

Re: Roast my website

I really like the darker one. It is very clean cut and looks professional.

Hope this help,
Terri
by tweetysmurf2350
Thu Sep 13, 2018 3:16 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Sarah's Offerings...
Replies: 23
Views: 4059

Re: Sarah's Offerings...

I like the design with the mountains, the images looks so crisp and clean.

Hope this helps,
Terri
by tweetysmurf2350
Thu Sep 13, 2018 3:13 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Preliminary Roughs for Project 1
Replies: 22
Views: 3793

Re: Preliminary Roughs for Project 1

I really like the one with the mountains. It is light and airy and reminds me of the Sierra Nevadas.

Hope this helps,
Terri
by tweetysmurf2350
Thu Sep 13, 2018 3:12 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: My roughs
Replies: 21
Views: 3689

Re: My roughs

I like the purple one better. I think that the text for your name needs to be a little bit lighter in color to make it easier to read. Just a thought.

Hope this helps,
Terri
by tweetysmurf2350
Thu Sep 13, 2018 3:09 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Preliminary Art Work
Replies: 22
Views: 3564

Re: Preliminary Art Work

I kind of feel like your mobile designs and your computer designs don't really work together. The themes are different and they don't look very cohesive.

Hope this helps,
Terri
by tweetysmurf2350
Thu Sep 13, 2018 3:07 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: My attempt
Replies: 21
Views: 3586

Re: My attempt

I like the second design, it seems more streamlined but the text for the menu the line underneath and above kind of makes the menu hard to read. It works for your name but not the menu.

Hope this Helps,
Terri
by tweetysmurf2350
Thu Sep 13, 2018 3:04 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 preliminary
Replies: 21
Views: 3311

Re: Project 1 preliminary

I like the rainbow motif of the first layout but I think you need more of the rainbow colors in the mobile design under it to make the designs work as one.

Hope this helps,
Terri