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by Jackal
Mon Dec 03, 2018 3:30 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: JHosier web prelim 11282018
Replies: 15
Views: 4981

Re: JHosier web prelim 11282018

I love the collage banner in the fifth one. I would definitely watch your alignments and maybe find some differing type faces. Your layouts are really strong and organized though, great job.
by Jackal
Mon Dec 03, 2018 3:23 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: project 3 prelim
Replies: 15
Views: 3487

Re: project 3 prelim

Your second design is so nice!! I love how the shapes gives it sort of a depth because they're just flying out of everywhere. Only thing I would say is that you should take off the drop shadow on the degree titles such as "Certificate of Achievement" etc. The type is just very small. Nice ...
by Jackal
Mon Dec 03, 2018 3:07 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Project #3 Roughs
Replies: 15
Views: 3351

Re: Project #3 Roughs

I'm really into your star trek design, its super interesting!
I would recommend making the type on your buttons a more legible font, instead of having all the text be the same.
Nice colors too, good job!!
by Jackal
Mon Dec 03, 2018 2:46 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: project-3-rough
Replies: 16
Views: 3367

Re: project-3-rough

I like your first designs! The background image is really great.
If you can, I would try incorporating the tiny colored squares more throughout your layout instead of just on the background!
by Jackal
Mon Dec 03, 2018 1:45 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Project III - Prelim Roughs
Replies: 15
Views: 3235

Re: Project III - Prelim Roughs

Your mobile designs are super neat and I'd like to see those translated into a desktop version!
With the first desktop, I feel like the pineapple doesn't really say "Graphic communications", it is a nice picture though haha!!
by Jackal
Mon Dec 03, 2018 1:43 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: PROJECT 3 ROUGHS-Agostina
Replies: 15
Views: 3401

Re: PROJECT 3 ROUGHS-Agostina

I really like your yellow concept and the idea of having those filled in boxes of text placed everywhere.
Kind of reminds me of like?? a ransom note but Educational.
I would recommend making the concept page a little more like the pink design.

Nice job so far!!
by Jackal
Mon Dec 03, 2018 1:40 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Project 3 Roughs
Replies: 14
Views: 3090

Re: Project 3 Roughs

I like your first concept but I feel like it could be pushed a little further so it's not so flat.
I would try moving the title to the top and make it stand out more! Nice job so far though!!
by Jackal
Mon Dec 03, 2018 1:35 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Project 3 Prelims
Replies: 15
Views: 3341

Re: Project 3 Prelims

Hi Staci!!

I really like your first option. Your choice of photo of the TMCC campus is so nice and all the different accents go together nicely!
Only thing I would do is change your fonts to match up with the degree page, nice job!!!
by Jackal
Mon Nov 26, 2018 11:46 pm
Forum: Project Four
Topic: Project 3 Roughs
Replies: 16
Views: 3721

Project 3 Roughs

Hi I based my designs on other designs that inspire me. In the first one I stuck more with TMCC colors. I plan on having it so the photos slide either left or right when you float your mouse over that direction, while inside the green rectangle. When you hover over one of the photos it will be shown...
by Jackal
Fri Nov 16, 2018 10:21 am
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 2 Final
Replies: 8
Views: 1926

Project 2 Final

Hi!! This is kind of late because once I finally figured out how to get my site up and working, I completely forgot we had to post it on the server. I did design my site on my laptop so I know the sizing might be a little weird. So here is my site! There are some little things I will go back and twe...