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by Jackal
Sun Sep 16, 2018 6:41 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Rough roughs for judgment
Replies: 23
Views: 3624

Re: Rough roughs for judgment

Hi Tandy! I agree and I like the darker color scheme, the photo you chose is really pretty in the third mobile layout and I'd love to see that in a desktop version. One thing though, is that your type looks very squished in the area you put it in, I would recommend playing with the leading and kerni...
by Jackal
Sun Sep 16, 2018 6:31 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Preliminary Critique
Replies: 23
Views: 3577

Re: Project 1 Preliminary Critique

Hi Emily!! Wowow!! Both of your layouts are so good, your drawing style makes me think of Howl's Moving Castle and I luv it a lot! I like the top layout a lot! The second one is really striking but I think the first two represent your work really well and the use of the handwritten looking font was ...
by Jackal
Sun Sep 16, 2018 6:08 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Preliminary Art Work
Replies: 22
Views: 3583

Re: Preliminary Art Work

Hi Kaitlyn! All of your designs are nice to look at, easy to navigate, and all of the photos you chose are just really cool! I like your first mobile concept a lot! The only thing is that your links look like they were just randomly placed in there. I would go in the direction of the second mobile i...
by Jackal
Sun Sep 16, 2018 6:00 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Sarah's Offerings...
Replies: 23
Views: 4068

Re: Sarah's Offerings...

Hi Sarah!!

I really love both of your mobile designs, the textures in the image on the first one are nice! The only thing on the first mobile one is that there's a lot of white space. Other than that I really like your style and how light it is!
by Jackal
Wed Sep 12, 2018 10:07 am
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Prelim
Replies: 23
Views: 4024

Project 1 Prelim

Hello! Here's some websites that inspired me: 1. https://brckhmptn.com/ 2. https://www.balenciaga.com/us 3. http://www.simonemarcarino.com/ 4. http://m-goldstein.com/ Looking at other designs, I realized I kind of crammed all of my information on one page without thinking of making a roll out menu f...
by Jackal
Wed Sep 12, 2018 9:33 am
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project UNO Prelim
Replies: 23
Views: 4058

Re: Project UNO Prelim

Hi Jason!! I love both of the photos you used but I'd have to say that I like your first set of designs more! I like how the photo is emphasized but you still had room to put type over it, it feels less crammed then the second desktop version. I'm trying to find something that you could work on but ...
by Jackal
Wed Sep 12, 2018 9:13 am
Forum: Project One
Topic: project 1 rough
Replies: 23
Views: 3835

Re: project 1 rough

Hello Veronica!! I think your design is very well composed and I love your use of the type fading in the background!! However, with your accent lines around the composition you should try playing with varying weights and styles just so it pops out a little more and doesn't 'blend' in with the weight...
by Jackal
Wed Sep 12, 2018 9:07 am
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project One: Preliminary
Replies: 21
Views: 3784

Re: Project One: Preliminary

Hi Terri, Both of your concepts are really neat!! I'm leaning more toward the nature one, maybe cause I also love nature, but the design of your trees are really nice and if you do go for that version you should try incorporating some more plants around the website. One thing that is kind of confusi...
by Jackal
Wed Sep 12, 2018 9:01 am
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Prelim!!!
Replies: 22
Views: 3934

Re: Project 1 Prelim!!!

Hi Evelyn, I love your second set of designs a lot!! Your use of color is so good and the little flowers are my favorite. With the mobile designs I do like the rollout option better though, it makes it look less cluttered to me. The only other thing is on your logo, it looks like your last name is f...
by Jackal
Tue Sep 11, 2018 11:33 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Prelim Critique
Replies: 22
Views: 4035

Re: Project 1 Prelim Critique

Hi Staci!! I love your second mobile design with the circle logo! The design is really nice and I love how the colors in the background aren't too overpowering! The only thing is that your paragraph looks kind of 'squished'. With your desktop views, I love the effect of the lowered opacity on the (t...