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- Sun Sep 16, 2018 6:41 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Rough roughs for judgment
- Replies: 23
- Views: 3624
Re: Rough roughs for judgment
Hi Tandy! I agree and I like the darker color scheme, the photo you chose is really pretty in the third mobile layout and I'd love to see that in a desktop version. One thing though, is that your type looks very squished in the area you put it in, I would recommend playing with the leading and kerni...
- Sun Sep 16, 2018 6:31 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1 Preliminary Critique
- Replies: 23
- Views: 3577
Re: Project 1 Preliminary Critique
Hi Emily!! Wowow!! Both of your layouts are so good, your drawing style makes me think of Howl's Moving Castle and I luv it a lot! I like the top layout a lot! The second one is really striking but I think the first two represent your work really well and the use of the handwritten looking font was ...
- Sun Sep 16, 2018 6:08 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Preliminary Art Work
- Replies: 22
- Views: 3583
Re: Preliminary Art Work
Hi Kaitlyn! All of your designs are nice to look at, easy to navigate, and all of the photos you chose are just really cool! I like your first mobile concept a lot! The only thing is that your links look like they were just randomly placed in there. I would go in the direction of the second mobile i...
- Sun Sep 16, 2018 6:00 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Sarah's Offerings...
- Replies: 23
- Views: 4068
Re: Sarah's Offerings...
Hi Sarah!!
I really love both of your mobile designs, the textures in the image on the first one are nice! The only thing on the first mobile one is that there's a lot of white space. Other than that I really like your style and how light it is!
I really love both of your mobile designs, the textures in the image on the first one are nice! The only thing on the first mobile one is that there's a lot of white space. Other than that I really like your style and how light it is!
- Wed Sep 12, 2018 10:07 am
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1 Prelim
- Replies: 23
- Views: 4024
Project 1 Prelim
Hello! Here's some websites that inspired me: 1. https://brckhmptn.com/ 2. https://www.balenciaga.com/us 3. http://www.simonemarcarino.com/ 4. http://m-goldstein.com/ Looking at other designs, I realized I kind of crammed all of my information on one page without thinking of making a roll out menu f...
- Wed Sep 12, 2018 9:33 am
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project UNO Prelim
- Replies: 23
- Views: 4058
Re: Project UNO Prelim
Hi Jason!! I love both of the photos you used but I'd have to say that I like your first set of designs more! I like how the photo is emphasized but you still had room to put type over it, it feels less crammed then the second desktop version. I'm trying to find something that you could work on but ...
- Wed Sep 12, 2018 9:13 am
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: project 1 rough
- Replies: 23
- Views: 3835
Re: project 1 rough
Hello Veronica!! I think your design is very well composed and I love your use of the type fading in the background!! However, with your accent lines around the composition you should try playing with varying weights and styles just so it pops out a little more and doesn't 'blend' in with the weight...
- Wed Sep 12, 2018 9:07 am
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project One: Preliminary
- Replies: 21
- Views: 3784
Re: Project One: Preliminary
Hi Terri, Both of your concepts are really neat!! I'm leaning more toward the nature one, maybe cause I also love nature, but the design of your trees are really nice and if you do go for that version you should try incorporating some more plants around the website. One thing that is kind of confusi...
- Wed Sep 12, 2018 9:01 am
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1 Prelim!!!
- Replies: 22
- Views: 3934
Re: Project 1 Prelim!!!
Hi Evelyn, I love your second set of designs a lot!! Your use of color is so good and the little flowers are my favorite. With the mobile designs I do like the rollout option better though, it makes it look less cluttered to me. The only other thing is on your logo, it looks like your last name is f...
- Tue Sep 11, 2018 11:33 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1 Prelim Critique
- Replies: 22
- Views: 4035
Re: Project 1 Prelim Critique
Hi Staci!! I love your second mobile design with the circle logo! The design is really nice and I love how the colors in the background aren't too overpowering! The only thing is that your paragraph looks kind of 'squished'. With your desktop views, I love the effect of the lowered opacity on the (t...