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by veronica chapman
Fri Oct 12, 2018 8:11 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Final Draft
Replies: 19
Views: 3239

Re: Project 1 Final Draft

really nice. I might remove the black box behind the photos and let your flower petals drape over a little on the edges.
by veronica chapman
Fri Oct 12, 2018 7:58 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Final Versions
Replies: 17
Views: 3061

Re: Project 1 Final Versions

The artwork is great! Is it your own? Either way, very nice.
by veronica chapman
Fri Oct 12, 2018 7:54 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Final website critique
Replies: 17
Views: 2971

Re: Final website critique

I think it's elegant. Love the black and white. A couple of required elements missing but beyond that, well done!
by veronica chapman
Fri Oct 12, 2018 7:50 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Projecto Uno Final
Replies: 16
Views: 2706

Re: Projecto Uno Final

Really nice. Well done. My only suggestion is to maybe play with the alignment on your body copy.
by veronica chapman
Fri Oct 12, 2018 7:47 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: project I final / Agostina Renaud
Replies: 18
Views: 3111

Re: project I final / Agostina Renaud

Nice! Simple and pretty. You might try a different alignment on your body copy.
by veronica chapman
Fri Oct 12, 2018 7:08 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: final
Replies: 17
Views: 2892

Re: final

I really love your artwork. I think your right margins need tending, and you're missing some required info.
by veronica chapman
Fri Oct 12, 2018 7:06 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project01-Final-Layout01
Replies: 19
Views: 3481

Re: Project01-Final-Layout01

I love your design work, but I'm not seeing any navigation.
by veronica chapman
Fri Oct 12, 2018 7:02 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project #1: Final
Replies: 17
Views: 3122

Re: Project #1: Final

Your site is very pretty! With your color scheme and the white type I don't believe you need the transparent box behind your body copy. I think that without it your composition would seem less broken up.
by veronica chapman
Fri Oct 12, 2018 6:56 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Final
Replies: 18
Views: 3289

Re: Project 1 Final

I like the feel of your site. My one suggestion, I believe your name should be larger than your navigation buttons with a more readable script.
by veronica chapman
Fri Oct 12, 2018 6:49 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Final!
Replies: 19
Views: 3427

Re: Final!

Hi, I think your design is really nice. It seems very calming. I would maybe suggest using a justified alignment on your body copy. Other than that I love it.