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- Tue Apr 30, 2013 7:58 am
- Forum: Project Four
- Topic: and on to project 3! (jenny breitrick)
- Replies: 14
- Views: 4154
Re: and on to project 3! (jenny breitrick)
Hi Jenny - You are thinking WAY outside the box here, and it makes your roughs rather compelling. I'd say go with whichever concept you personally like best, but I will say that they're both somewhat dark and moody. I'd look into ways of adding more color, or bright pops of color to enliven it.
- Tue Apr 30, 2013 7:53 am
- Forum: Project Four
- Topic: project 3 comp #1
- Replies: 17
- Views: 5207
Re: project 3 comp #1
Hi Campbell - Nice start, and you've chosen a great photograph to dominate the home page. I can't really offer any suggestions though until I see more.
- Tue Apr 30, 2013 7:51 am
- Forum: Project Four
- Topic: Project 3 Prelim Dylan Bivens
- Replies: 16
- Views: 5993
Re: Project 3 Prelim Dylan Bivens
Hi Dylan - I think both of your concepts are solid, but I'm leaning toward the first set, where you have the transparent checkerboard pattern as a backdrop. I really enjoy the type in your GRC masthead and I think your pages have a nice sense of balance. I think any way that you can play up this ide...
- Tue Apr 30, 2013 7:47 am
- Forum: Project Four
- Topic: mark p. prelim
- Replies: 16
- Views: 4042
Re: mark p. prelim
Hi Mark - I'm drawn to your circle concept. It's a really interesting design technique, and I like how you've used it on both pages. I do think that your color scheme needs some tweaking (it is really hard to make reds and greens work together), and the font you've chosen for the masthead is somewha...
- Tue Apr 30, 2013 7:43 am
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project 2 final
- Replies: 12
- Views: 3774
Re: Project 2 final
The vibe on your redesign is right in line with what I'd want to see if I were an insomniac seeking a cure. It's calming, clean, and absolutely free of clutter. I think it's a great look.
- Mon Apr 29, 2013 10:22 am
- Forum: Project Four
- Topic: Project 3 Preliminary Critique (Rebecca Baumann)
- Replies: 17
- Views: 4169
Project 3 Preliminary Critique (Rebecca Baumann)
As I worked on thumbnails for this project, I came to a couple of conclusions about how I wanted this to look. First, I wanted to use a flat design style. Second, I wanted to use the TMCC color palette. Third, I wanted to incorporate icon-like illustrations. So, my two layouts below aren't really di...
- Fri Apr 26, 2013 11:22 am
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Project 1 and 2 FINAL
- Replies: 11
- Views: 3552
Re: Project 1 and 2 FINAL
Hi Rachel - I really like what you did with the redesign for Reno Bighorns. Sports websites tend toward too much clutter, and you really cleaned it up, while giving them a much more compelling home page graphic. The only thing that seems out of place is the gray background. I'd be curious to see wha...
- Wed Apr 24, 2013 9:23 am
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: finally...project 2
- Replies: 11
- Views: 3281
Re: finally...project 2
Hi Juan - Wow, you did a great job! You took something really ugly, and completely improved it. I think it was wise to ditch their butt-ugly logo and create your own masthead. I really like how you integrated the imagery into the background of the content areas. It's subtle, but it adds interest wit...
- Wed Apr 24, 2013 9:17 am
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: project 1 and project 2 final!
- Replies: 13
- Views: 4951
Re: project 1 and project 2 final!
Hi Mel - Your work feels really vibrant, and it stands apart from everyone else's. I think you are particularly good at picking colors, and using strong contrast to set it all off. If I have a criticism though, it's that both websites feel really similar. It's good to have a style, but you also don'...
- Wed Apr 24, 2013 9:12 am
- Forum: Project Three
- Topic: Nicole Hicks, Project Two Final
- Replies: 13
- Views: 3794
Re: Nicole Hicks, Project Two Final
Hi Nicole - I like your use of the diagonal lines on the header and footer areas - that's my favorite part of the design. I would like to see more images of horses throughout the content area, since they're such appealing animals.