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by olddragon
Wed Oct 12, 2011 7:52 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project One. Vy Tat
Replies: 19
Views: 6175

Re: Project One. Vy Tat

I am seeing the centering, but then I have Firefox. I think you did a great job and the idea is so unique. Very creative.
by olddragon
Wed Oct 12, 2011 7:48 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Complete
Replies: 15
Views: 3431

Re: Project 1 Complete

I think my one suggestion would be to make all the gray boxes the same and use the lighter gray, and then to make the background black. You have some original link ideas that expand the idea of what the web site is, like the holiday link. A little off topic from the rest of your site, but it is nice...
by olddragon
Wed Oct 12, 2011 1:57 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 - Kyle Smith
Replies: 21
Views: 5239

Re: Project 1 - Kyle Smith

I think I have already commented on your site. I like it a lot. I like the big yellow headline, and here is an example of where blue on black works well, when it is big enough. If I have one suggestion... which may not really work in practice, I kind of want to see the smaller My Skills column set o...
by olddragon
Wed Oct 12, 2011 1:53 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 -Carrie Rogers
Replies: 16
Views: 3923

Re: Project 1 -Carrie Rogers

Your transparent look through the text to the water works very well. Love the glow on the water. I want to make the background image a little brighter, but I am someone with old eyes. I want everything to look brighter. The water is actually fine, it is the wallpaper that I can’t quite see. The bigg...
by olddragon
Wed Oct 12, 2011 1:46 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: project_1_charlie_lipon
Replies: 15
Views: 3277

Re: project_1_charlie_lipon

Yes, the site is big. It gets a bit annoying to navigate and I am looking at in on the class monitors. I am not sure that is the most successful strategy. Otherwise, it is a really fun website to look at. Love the colors! It would be a shame for people to turn away because they can’t navigate it on ...
by olddragon
Wed Oct 12, 2011 1:37 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1-Tina Bodden
Replies: 15
Views: 3711

Re: Project 1-Tina Bodden

Your background is so busy, I guess it forces the eye to look at the one area that isn’t so busy, the content area, so perhaps that is a good idea. I am undecided about that. I like your content area a lot. I might have lightened up the photo of you a wee bit. And your body copy being centered is in...
by olddragon
Wed Oct 12, 2011 1:30 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: project_1_ryan_hackbarth
Replies: 14
Views: 3448

Re: project_1_ryan_hackbarth

I like the way you split up the navigation, separating the projects from the links and other areas. I may adapt something like that for my website, because I am lacking a home button, and places for site information. My one suggestion is that your theme seems to be small… text and photo, along with ...
by olddragon
Wed Oct 12, 2011 1:21 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1- Lindsey Walters
Replies: 15
Views: 3612

Re: Project 1- Lindsey Walters

I am seeing some problems with the headline type. It looks degraded. Some of your icons in the bottom right have a problem too. The photo creates a great design, moving the eye back and forth across the page with those white lines. Overall, I like the look a lot. A little grammar clean-up needed on ...
by olddragon
Wed Oct 12, 2011 1:13 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project_1 Jose Gomez
Replies: 16
Views: 3863

Re: Project_1 Jose Gomez

I know some don't like the outlined text, but I do... but maybe not on the smaller type in the navigation. You definitely need to proofread and correct the grammar in your body copy and make sure it doesn't fade out over the white in the background. You could indent deeper to make sure it avoids tha...
by olddragon
Wed Oct 12, 2011 1:04 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 - Brie Porterfield
Replies: 13
Views: 3136

Re: Project 1 - Brie Porterfield

I think your site is very successful. I don't see anything I would change. Graphics are great, and text is engaging. I love your little guy in the phone booth. He is the only thing in color, I think. Maybe if that is one thing I could say, more color, or all gray scale.... why just him?