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by Andramada
Sat May 04, 2019 2:18 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 3 Preliminary
Replies: 7
Views: 1729

Re: Project 3 Preliminary

your first design is very clean and allows for scrolling while limiting the need for it. there is a definite hierarchy between the information and the first thing my eyes are drawn to happens to be the logo image which seems fitting considering the content. the choice of fonts are readable and clean...
by Andramada
Sat May 04, 2019 2:10 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 3 Roughs
Replies: 8
Views: 1787

Re: Project 3 Roughs

i like both designs. they both feel like something that represents tmcc. the first set of designs the type choice is very clean and readable in the body copy while being expressive and interesting in the headlines. there is a definite hierarchy in the organization and i can clearly see where every t...
by Andramada
Sat May 04, 2019 2:03 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 3 prelim roughs
Replies: 7
Views: 1706

Re: Project 3 prelim roughs

both designs are visually simulating and guide the eye down the page. the first design my eyes are immediately attracted to the open doors because it contrast so well with everything else on top of it being to the upper right which naturally is where a person wants to look. however this detracts fro...
by Andramada
Sat May 04, 2019 1:17 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 3 roughs
Replies: 7
Views: 1678

Re: Project 3 roughs

i am a little uncertain of wether or not there are three designs or two however i will respond as if there are two. the design with image back grounds: the design is simple and clean. the body text is readable and clean, and some basic hierarchy is established. however it reminds me of every website...
by Andramada
Sat May 04, 2019 1:08 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project Three
Replies: 6
Views: 1533

Re: Project Three

i think both designs have potential. the first set of designs are visually interesting and the triangle navigation on the front page is very unique. the body copy however gets lost in some places and is difficult to read do to placement. a box behind the text might resolve this issue. the second des...
by Andramada
Tue Apr 30, 2019 4:19 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 3 Prelim j.stille
Replies: 7
Views: 1694

Project 3 Prelim j.stille

I choose to use Arial as my font because it is clean and simple. the simplicity and clean font will not over power my design nor the designs of the student work for show casing the work is the most important. i choose colors i thought they completment the tmcc colors. the live website would have the...
by Andramada
Sun Mar 31, 2019 3:17 pm
Forum: *OLD* Project Three *OLD*
Topic: PROJECT 2 ROUGHS
Replies: 9
Views: 1833

Re: PROJECT 2 ROUGHS

I believe the colors in your second design are the most visually interesting and reminiscent of flowers but I do not think they work with the highly saturated Moana nursery logo. This could be rectified with using a more saturated color palate and adding more of the complimentary color of the logos ...
by Andramada
Sun Mar 31, 2019 3:10 pm
Forum: *OLD* Project Three *OLD*
Topic: Project 2 roughs
Replies: 9
Views: 1780

Re: Project 2 roughs

I prefer the website with the picture as a back ground it makes the whole site seem more interesting while highlighting what the site is all about. Your choice of nots pair pretty well together but I think your body copy would benefit from a more readable sans serif the the serif font.
by Andramada
Sun Mar 31, 2019 3:05 pm
Forum: *OLD* Project Three *OLD*
Topic: Project 2 Preliminary Critique
Replies: 9
Views: 1790

Re: Project 2 Preliminary Critique

Your second design is very strong with its bold red banner in front. The banner definitely calls to action and captures the attention of the audience. The font choices balance each other very well and adds to the energy of the sport. Your title is in the perfect spot for it sits right where the user...
by Andramada
Sun Mar 31, 2019 2:56 pm
Forum: *OLD* Project Three *OLD*
Topic: Here is some very rough roughs for Project 2.
Replies: 7
Views: 1578

Re: Here is some very rough roughs for Project 2.

Your design is very simple which aides to the ease of navigation. The color palette of desaturated oranges is very complimentary to the dessert background uses in the back ground. This is very pleasing to look at, I’m curious if the city is actually in the desert if so this design is definitely work...