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by JBobier
Fri Mar 08, 2019 2:24 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Final project 1 critique
Replies: 10
Views: 2134

Re: Final project 1 critique

Great choice Katrina! This design is a lot easier to read and it has nice balance to it. It is a bold purple but I like it. Good job!
by JBobier
Fri Mar 08, 2019 2:22 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 01 final critique
Replies: 10
Views: 2076

Re: Project 01 final critique

Good choice. I really like your design. Great job!
by JBobier
Fri Mar 08, 2019 2:20 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: PROJECT 1 FINAL
Replies: 11
Views: 2311

Re: PROJECT 1 FINAL

Good improvements! I really like the watercolor background. For me I would still like to see your name as a headline soiknow whose it is at a glance. That’s more my issue than it is with your design. Good Job!
by JBobier
Fri Mar 08, 2019 2:16 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: project one final
Replies: 11
Views: 2120

Re: project one final

You know that you are very creative. I like your design. The added design feature works well. If I have on critique it may be a little too much body copy for someone like me. I don’t think I would take the time to read all of it on a homepage. I would click a link to read more for sure. You are good...
by JBobier
Fri Mar 08, 2019 2:14 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Final
Replies: 11
Views: 2251

Re: Project 1 Final

Great changes! You have made a huge improvement. I think it does a great job showing your personality. Good job!
by JBobier
Fri Mar 08, 2019 2:12 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Final Drafts
Replies: 10
Views: 2041

Re: Final Drafts

I really like your design. It is a perfect color scheme that works well with your flower. Good job!
by JBobier
Fri Mar 08, 2019 2:11 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: An improvment
Replies: 11
Views: 1778

Re: An improvment

I am liking the pineapple version more after the changes. For some reason, and it very easy could be my eyes, but your name with those colors is blurry to my eyes. I don’t mind the drop shadow on the text. Interested in seeing which one you go with and the mobile design that goes with the final vers...
by JBobier
Fri Mar 08, 2019 2:07 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Latham's final (for now) design
Replies: 12
Views: 2237

Re: Latham's final (for now) design

Latham,

I am intrigued with the slide out menu on the web version. I look forward to seeing it active. I like the critique that Katrina gave. I think it would be a little bit easier to read if it was inverted and the text was more left aligned. Otherwise, interesting design. Good job!
by JBobier
Fri Mar 08, 2019 2:02 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: My final Designs
Replies: 10
Views: 2078

Re: My final Designs

I think that you made a nice change. Without the picture of the girl it cleans up the design. The more I look at your design the more I like the simplicity of the black and white design. Good job!
by JBobier
Fri Mar 08, 2019 2:00 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: project-1-final
Replies: 8
Views: 1813

Re: project-1-final

Charlie,

I like the changes you made. I think it is a cleaner and simpler design. Getting rid of some of the gradient was a good idea.