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by John1612
Mon May 06, 2019 7:15 am
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 3 Prelim j.stille
Replies: 7
Views: 1694

Re: Project 3 Prelim j.stille

I like the ones with the black backgroud looks well orginized and it is easy too read. The only thing I see is that a few imagges that repeat.

Submitted by Charlie Johnson.
by John1612
Mon May 06, 2019 7:04 am
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 3 prelim roughs
Replies: 7
Views: 1706

Re: Project 3 prelim roughs

I like the door concept one. It feels like a decision is about to be made, and I also like how it is kind of on a billboard. Feels like if someone is driving on the road it would be easy to read and understand. The only thing is the room feels a little too dark.

submitted by Charlie Johnson
by John1612
Mon May 06, 2019 6:46 am
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 3 roughs
Replies: 7
Views: 1678

Re: Project 3 roughs

I'm really enjoying the one with the colors in the backgroundTMCC-mobile-rough2.png
TMCC-mobile-rough2.png The colors really speak to me. One problem I see is there seems to be no room for other information.

submitted by charlie Johnson
by John1612
Mon May 06, 2019 6:07 am
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 3 Roughs
Replies: 8
Views: 1787

Re: Project 3 Roughs

I like the one with illustration like how simple it it is and how it flows. It makes it seem like the stuff that is going to be learned is fun and easy. The placement of every object seems to be in the right place. Thank you for the laugh I really enjoyed the poll.
by John1612
Mon May 06, 2019 5:49 am
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 3 Preliminary
Replies: 7
Views: 1729

Re: Project 3 Preliminary

My eye immediately went to the school design I like the shots of the campus it is well pleasing. It gets the point across great.
The only critique is of your mobile shot I think there is too much green. I would suggest evening it out.
submitted by Charlie Johnson
by John1612
Mon May 06, 2019 5:38 am
Forum: Project Three
Topic: prelim p3.
Replies: 4
Views: 1220

prelim p3.

For one design I chose a simple approach trying to let the main content be the focus. that is the one with the rainbow ribbon effect. As for the other design I was trying for a even balance of both background and content.
by John1612
Fri Apr 19, 2019 8:17 pm
Forum: *OLD* Project Three *OLD*
Topic: Project 02
Replies: 6
Views: 1504

Re: Project 02

Really like the layouts of your designs. The only thing that needs work is the type is a little hard to read. it makes people have to look extremely close to the screen.
by John1612
Fri Apr 19, 2019 8:07 pm
Forum: *OLD* Project Three *OLD*
Topic: Project 2 final
Replies: 8
Views: 1882

Re: Project 2 final

The only problem I have found, is that when clicking on some items, in the menu, some of the pages won't load. Other then that I like how the website flows. I like how everything is well thought out.
by John1612
Fri Apr 19, 2019 7:49 pm
Forum: *OLD* Project Three *OLD*
Topic: P2 Final
Replies: 8
Views: 1972

Re: P2 Final

I really like the whole concept and execution of your designs. the bottles in the background really complements the type on every page. Everything you did is very pleasing
by John1612
Tue Apr 02, 2019 10:57 am
Forum: *OLD* Project Three *OLD*
Topic: Project 02 Prem Critique!
Replies: 9
Views: 1891

Re: Project 02 Prem Critique!

Hi classmate this is Charlie Johnson:

I really prefer the blue design the one that has the food in the background. It reads well and it's not that overpowering. On your brown design it feels like everything is clashing. The brown doesn't work well with the design