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by Fear The Deer
Fri Dec 13, 2019 11:58 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 4 Final
Replies: 1
Views: 740

Project 4 Final

Hi all! Here's my final for project 4:

http://www.grc175.com/student/fall-2019 ... index.html

I think there's still some sizing issues I need to go back in and fix, but overall this project was really fun! Hope you all have a good holiday!
by Fear The Deer
Thu Nov 28, 2019 12:00 am
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 4: Prelims
Replies: 12
Views: 4162

Re: Project 4: Prelims

Hi Mackenzie!

I really love your second set of layouts- especially the homepage, which is a great simple layout that's going to work well on a lot of different size displays.
by Fear The Deer
Wed Nov 27, 2019 11:59 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 4 Preliminary
Replies: 12
Views: 3787

Re: Project 4 Preliminary

Hello!

I like the second set- the grey of the nav bar gives it a nice weight and frames the content. I think the bar could be made a lot thinner, as there's lots of space around the text.
by Fear The Deer
Wed Nov 27, 2019 11:57 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 4 Preliminary-Katelyn Brooke
Replies: 11
Views: 3361

Re: Project 4 Preliminary-Katelyn Brooke

Hi Katelyn!

I'm leaning towards the second set- it's very clean and navigable, but the imagery being so dominant keeps it interesting! I think your use of yellow elements throughout could make for some really cool effects, too.
by Fear The Deer
Wed Nov 27, 2019 11:55 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 4 premil
Replies: 12
Views: 3691

Re: Project 4 premil

Hello!

I really love your 01 concepts- the brown color palette is very natural, and the slight sepia-ish tone on the photos really ties it in well! I think the font color could be darker, I have trouble reading the peachy color on the white background.
by Fear The Deer
Wed Nov 27, 2019 11:53 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project_04_prelim
Replies: 11
Views: 3849

Re: Project_04_prelim

I'm leaning more towards your blue design! I think it could use a darker box behind the body copy on pages, the white text could use more contrast to read it more easily.
by Fear The Deer
Wed Nov 27, 2019 11:50 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 4 prelim roughs
Replies: 12
Views: 3890

Re: Project 4 prelim roughs

Howdy!

The pencils as a navigation bar is very fun and whimsical! I think the 'truckee meadows' at the top could stand out more, maybe a heavier weight or different font?
by Fear The Deer
Wed Nov 27, 2019 11:48 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: (Fall, 2019) Project 04 Preliminary Critique
Replies: 11
Views: 3395

Re: (Fall, 2019) Project 04 Preliminary Critique

Hello!

I think both could work really well- on the first one, I really like your concept of photo frames for the gallery! I personally have a bit of trouble reading the green headlines on the second set.
by Fear The Deer
Wed Nov 27, 2019 11:45 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: project_4_preliminary_critique
Replies: 10
Views: 3243

Re: project_4_preliminary_critique

Hi Sandra!

I like your 01 concept a bit more- I think the background image communicates what the program is quickly. I think the bottom bar could be made thinner, to give more space to the background.
by Fear The Deer
Wed Nov 27, 2019 11:42 pm
Forum: Project Three
Topic: Project 04 Prelim
Replies: 11
Views: 3890

Re: Project 04 Prelim

Howdy!

I like your choice for fonts in the C2 set, they do a great job giving things a clean and modern look! I also like the layout being more aligned to the right almost, its unusual and eye catching.