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by suiish
Tue Feb 11, 2020 7:52 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Prelim
Replies: 12
Views: 2078

Re: Project 1 Prelim

Both your designs look good. I personally like the blue design more than the orange one. It's easier on the eye and the layout is nice too!
by suiish
Tue Feb 11, 2020 7:47 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Prelim
Replies: 10
Views: 1770

Re: Project 1 Prelim

Your portrait of yourself looks super cool!! I really like the layout of your design, but the bottom text on your mobile version is a bit hard to read. Otherwise your designs look really good!
by suiish
Tue Feb 11, 2020 7:44 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Preliminary Critique
Replies: 12
Views: 2283

Re: Project 1 Preliminary Critique

I think your first design is ore successful, however your image on the black background is hard to see. I recommend you either change the image, or brighten the image or background. I really like your color choices as well.
by suiish
Tue Feb 11, 2020 7:41 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project One Preliminary Critique
Replies: 11
Views: 2078

Re: Project One Preliminary Critique

I like your first design better! It's very modern looking and I really like the way you aligned the type.
by suiish
Tue Feb 11, 2020 7:39 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: prelim- project 1
Replies: 13
Views: 1839

Re: prelim- project 1

I like the way you played with typography in your first design. The colors also look super nice together. I think your body type color is a bit hard to read so I recommend making it a more readable color and making the type a bit bigger.
by suiish
Tue Feb 11, 2020 7:35 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project one preliminary
Replies: 11
Views: 1884

Re: Project one preliminary

I really like both of your designs! I like how happy your second design looks, but I also really like how sleek your first design is. Your first design is a bit dark so I recommend adding some contrast to the design otherwise it's great!
by suiish
Tue Feb 11, 2020 7:32 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 - Kyle Jennings
Replies: 10
Views: 1856

Re: Project 1 - Kyle Jennings

Hi! I really like the colors on your second design! They are super vibrant and more memorable than your first design. I also really like the layout of your designs. Good job!
by suiish
Tue Feb 11, 2020 7:27 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 01 Preliminary Critique
Replies: 10
Views: 1885

Re: Project 01 Preliminary Critique

I think your third idea is the most successful. It's very clean and modern looking. I also think the fonts you chose really fit your website. The first idea is really nice as well, but I think the colors are too similar so if you go with that one I recommend adding more contrast.
by suiish
Tue Feb 11, 2020 7:19 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Prelim Critique
Replies: 11
Views: 1736

Re: Project 1 Prelim Critique

I really like how clean both of your designs are, it makes them look super cool and professional. I think the fully white version of your design is the more successful one, however the text on the website is a bit too small to read. Other than that, they're cool designs!
by suiish
Tue Feb 11, 2020 7:12 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Rough Drafts
Replies: 12
Views: 2117

Re: Project 1 Rough Drafts

Hi! I really like both your designs. The texture on the first design really stands out, but I like your sunflower design more!