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by KJX
Sat Feb 29, 2020 2:13 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1
Replies: 11
Views: 2008

Project 1

Hey Class,

I have revised my website design. After listening to the feed back from the class I cleaned the overall appearance, darkened the background, and lighten the fonts. I also added a log in the corner and added more gradients with some opacity changes. I hope everyone likes my changes.

-KJ
by KJX
Thu Feb 13, 2020 6:47 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project one preliminary
Replies: 11
Views: 1898

Re: Project one preliminary

Hey! I like both of your designs, but I want to see more of your personality in the designs. Tell me who you are with the design you show us. Dark or light color, photos you have taken, and lots to explore for your background.

-KJ
by KJX
Thu Feb 13, 2020 6:45 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: prelim- project 1
Replies: 13
Views: 1848

Re: prelim- project 1

Hey! I like your use of yellow in both of your designs. I'm not sure if it is the computer, but all your type is burry/not readable. Not sure if your dock is the right size or if it is the grc175 website.

-KJ
by KJX
Thu Feb 13, 2020 6:43 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: project one prelim
Replies: 12
Views: 2054

Re: project one prelim

Hey! I like both of your designs. 1 & 2 your title and paragraph get washed out by your background, try adding a lightly colored box to be in between your type and background.

-KJ
by KJX
Thu Feb 13, 2020 6:41 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project One Preliminary Critique
Replies: 11
Views: 2090

Re: Project One Preliminary Critique

Hey! I like both of your designs. 1 and 2 needs some simplification to express that background awesomeness and your tile at the top. 3 and 4 get rid of the awkward blueish triangles.

-KJ
by KJX
Thu Feb 13, 2020 6:33 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Prelim Critique
Replies: 11
Views: 1738

Re: Project 1 Prelim Critique

Hey! I love your blurred image through your first version. Keep up the good work. Explore more with that concept.

-KJ
by KJX
Thu Feb 13, 2020 6:30 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Preliminary Critique
Replies: 11
Views: 1947

Re: Project 1 Preliminary Critique

Hey! I love your character, keep it no matter what! Shows us your abilities. Overall I would say to use less pastel colors so we can actually feel your love for graphic design.

-KJ
by KJX
Thu Feb 13, 2020 6:28 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 01 Preliminary Critique
Replies: 10
Views: 1894

Re: Project 01 Preliminary Critique

Hey! I like both of your websites. Add some photos on them for the next round of projects that way as viewers we get a full understanding of your website look.

-KJ
by KJX
Thu Feb 13, 2020 6:27 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Preliminary Critique
Replies: 12
Views: 2292

Re: Project 1 Preliminary Critique

Hey! I like your tee image, gives lots of personality for the brand and your website. Keep up the good work.

-KJ
by KJX
Thu Feb 13, 2020 6:25 pm
Forum: Project One
Topic: Project 1 Rough Drafts
Replies: 12
Views: 2125

Re: Project 1 Rough Drafts

Hey! I really like both of your designs. I would like to take your paper imaged buttons to the sunflower version. Just an idea. Overall I like both of the designs.

-KJ