Hey Class,
I have revised my website design. After listening to the feed back from the class I cleaned the overall appearance, darkened the background, and lighten the fonts. I also added a log in the corner and added more gradients with some opacity changes. I hope everyone likes my changes.
-KJ
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- Sat Feb 29, 2020 2:13 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1
- Replies: 11
- Views: 2008
- Thu Feb 13, 2020 6:47 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project one preliminary
- Replies: 11
- Views: 1898
Re: Project one preliminary
Hey! I like both of your designs, but I want to see more of your personality in the designs. Tell me who you are with the design you show us. Dark or light color, photos you have taken, and lots to explore for your background.
-KJ
-KJ
- Thu Feb 13, 2020 6:45 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: prelim- project 1
- Replies: 13
- Views: 1848
Re: prelim- project 1
Hey! I like your use of yellow in both of your designs. I'm not sure if it is the computer, but all your type is burry/not readable. Not sure if your dock is the right size or if it is the grc175 website.
-KJ
-KJ
- Thu Feb 13, 2020 6:43 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: project one prelim
- Replies: 12
- Views: 2054
Re: project one prelim
Hey! I like both of your designs. 1 & 2 your title and paragraph get washed out by your background, try adding a lightly colored box to be in between your type and background.
-KJ
-KJ
- Thu Feb 13, 2020 6:41 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project One Preliminary Critique
- Replies: 11
- Views: 2090
Re: Project One Preliminary Critique
Hey! I like both of your designs. 1 and 2 needs some simplification to express that background awesomeness and your tile at the top. 3 and 4 get rid of the awkward blueish triangles.
-KJ
-KJ
- Thu Feb 13, 2020 6:33 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1 Prelim Critique
- Replies: 11
- Views: 1738
Re: Project 1 Prelim Critique
Hey! I love your blurred image through your first version. Keep up the good work. Explore more with that concept.
-KJ
-KJ
- Thu Feb 13, 2020 6:30 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1 Preliminary Critique
- Replies: 11
- Views: 1947
Re: Project 1 Preliminary Critique
Hey! I love your character, keep it no matter what! Shows us your abilities. Overall I would say to use less pastel colors so we can actually feel your love for graphic design.
-KJ
-KJ
- Thu Feb 13, 2020 6:28 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 01 Preliminary Critique
- Replies: 10
- Views: 1894
Re: Project 01 Preliminary Critique
Hey! I like both of your websites. Add some photos on them for the next round of projects that way as viewers we get a full understanding of your website look.
-KJ
-KJ
- Thu Feb 13, 2020 6:27 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1 Preliminary Critique
- Replies: 12
- Views: 2292
Re: Project 1 Preliminary Critique
Hey! I like your tee image, gives lots of personality for the brand and your website. Keep up the good work.
-KJ
-KJ
- Thu Feb 13, 2020 6:25 pm
- Forum: Project One
- Topic: Project 1 Rough Drafts
- Replies: 12
- Views: 2125
Re: Project 1 Rough Drafts
Hey! I really like both of your designs. I would like to take your paper imaged buttons to the sunflower version. Just an idea. Overall I like both of the designs.
-KJ
-KJ