Project 1 Final Draft

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kj923
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Project 1 Final Draft

Post by kj923 »

I took the ideas from my preliminary work and applied different parts to my final design. I like working with black and white in website designs so it doesn't distract from my actual work.

Hope you enjoy! :)
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kj923
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Re: Project 1 Final Draft

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mobile design
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emilyduke
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Post by emilyduke »

Hey! These are awesome! I really like the simplicity of the black and white, I think you could even get rid of the big succulent on the left and you would have a really clean and simple design with a pop of color from the blue succulent, either way looks nice!
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matt
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Post by matt »

nice. did you take those pix?
I like the concept.
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jason_hosier
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Post by jason_hosier »

I really like your choice of font and your images are top notch. on the right side where the flower intersects with the image it looks a little strange. Maybe use a transparency or something? idk but it looks like an area to work on. My first impression was that your composition is rather stunning. Good work.
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Drakula
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Post by Drakula »

Hi Kaitlyn,

Your layouts are beautiful, the little added pops of color really give it a nice mood. I really enjoy your minimalistic touch. Great job!
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anayaestevan
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Post by anayaestevan »

Great work! Much better than the previous one.

I like the overall layout and colors. I like the psuedo 3-d thing going on too.

The font is fine for your body copy but I'm not sure it helps much with anything else. I would play around with that a bit more. Maybe you could add some perspective on those images to make them face the same directions as the flowers? Just an idea.
Estevan Anaya

Jones
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Post by Jones »

Neat-o! I like the images, color scheme and use of white space to balance out the body text. It's eye catching and makes one ask what is going on here... but in a good way. Nice.

tweetysmurf2350
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Post by tweetysmurf2350 »

I really like the knocked out images on your websites. They really pop ofd of that white background.
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Jackal
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Post by Jackal »

Hi Kaitlyn!

I really love this design and your choice of the succulents! Also your photos are super nice! I would maybe mess around with the positioning of them in your mobile version just so there isn't that giant patch of white space in the area on the right. Nice job!!
JACKAL
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