Final!!

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Jackal
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Hi Courtney!

I like your color choices a lot, only thing I would say is to make the type smaller in your body copy. It looks a little too crammed in the square. Cool illustrations tho, nice job!
JACKAL
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kj923
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Very cool animations! They look like you, impressive!! I love the peach color you chose too! it works nicely with your style
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tweetysmurf2350
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Great job, Courtney! It really came along pretty well! I love your artwork! It is so fun!
Terri J. Taber

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hiitsyuri24
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I really like your art and colors! Really cool!
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evexhouses
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I really love your drawings! Super cute, The layouts are easy to navigate and everything is well put together, awesome job!
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giusti56
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Hey, I like your illustrations and how friendly of a vibe they give off. I think little minor things are needed, but more for information and not much for design.
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Big_DaDdy
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Post by Big_DaDdy »

Courtney, you're obviously very talented at drawing, awesome stuff.
I think you're over cluttering your web and blocking your drawing with rectangles being too big. I think you can make those boxes smaller and really show off your illustrations.
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raton de biblioteca
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Post by raton de biblioteca »

The color choices and the feel of the art tell me a lot about your style! The only thing missing is the placement of each of the parts, I am not sure about the About Me being in such different locations on the mobile and desktop versions it makes more sense closer to the paragraph.
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Stasiavous
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I like the changes you made. You should read over your paragraph for grammar and punctuation. Great job!
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