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hiitsyuri24
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Post by hiitsyuri24 »

The animals are really cute! I would make the paragraphs same between mobile and computer version.
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evexhouses
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Post by evexhouses »

Hey Clara, Your art style is really interesting here. The colors all go very well together. I think maybe you should choose a different color for your body copy though, Great job!!
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Big_DaDdy
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Post by Big_DaDdy »

I like your colors Clara. I get this children's book feel from your web layout.
I think putting your Home, Projects, and Links would be better suited at the top and smaller type size.
Maybe revisiting some web design layouts could bring forth some inspiration.
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veronica chapman
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Post by veronica chapman »

I really love your artwork. I think your right margins need tending, and you're missing some required info.

raton de biblioteca
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Post by raton de biblioteca »

The image choice is very playful, I like the color choices. The thing that I am concerned about is the text flow, the margins should be tighter or perhaps the font smaller?
Rachel Cao
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Stasiavous
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I love the changes you made to your layout! I agree with Emily - I think you can get rid of the fish - or copy the mobile design with the fish in the bear mouth for the computer design. Awesome job!
Staci Wilson

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giusti56
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The geometric trees are still one of my favorite things about this design. I like the bears and the whole composition. I think playing with the colors might help a little.
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Jaime Ramey
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Re: final

Post by Jaime Ramey »

Hi Clara,
I really like your illustration on your layout. Its really cute!
Jaime
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