Project 1 Final

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kj923
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Post by kj923 »

April! I really love your color pallet! and your web layout works very nicely.

In your mobile design, I like how you used a plain neutral color to expand your background image. One thing I would suggest is to focus on your rule of thirds. It feels too centered and might look better if there were some different sizes going on :)

Really great work!!
-Kaitlyn Johnson

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Big_DaDdy
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Joined: Mon Aug 27, 2018 6:19 pm

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Post by Big_DaDdy »

love, love, love the feel of your photo! Very clean and professional.
The only suggestion would be to make the email, GRC info smaller--like fine print--so that it doesn't take attention away from your overall composition. Nicely done.
Jason Alavez

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evexhouses
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Post by evexhouses »

I really like your designs! They look very professional and they are easy to understand. I do think you should make your name a bit bigger but other than that Awesome Job!!
~"Graphic Design is my passion" -idk

-Evelyn Lopez

hiitsyuri24
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Post by hiitsyuri24 »

I like that look really clean and smart. I also like that image and the colors that you chose!
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raton de biblioteca
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Post by raton de biblioteca »

This is super fun! I didn't even think to place text vertically!!! This is a great choice! Especially emphasizing thinking outside of the box-super punny! The only thing that is bothering me is the text, I think you are quoting something? Maybe make it more obvious otherwise the personal pronoun use seems too irregular and distracting for what you want to portray.
Rachel Cao
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veronica chapman
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Post by veronica chapman »

I like the feel of your site. My one suggestion, I believe your name should be larger than your navigation buttons with a more readable script.

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Stasiavous
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Post by Stasiavous »

I adore the changes you made to your layout! The background is perfectly professional and inspiring. Great job!
Staci Wilson

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giusti56
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Joined: Wed Aug 29, 2018 10:05 am

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Hey, I really like your composition and how it kinda portrays the image of a designer. It has good colors and the page flow is really nice.
-Tony Giusti

Jaime Ramey
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Post by Jaime Ramey »

Hi April,
I really like the feel of your design.
Nice Job,
Jaime
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