prelims_project_02_sjones

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themeg98
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Re: prelims_project_02_sjones

Post by themeg98 »

I really like the second roughs. Although the bg on the first on is a nice picture it takes away from the design by creating contrast issues. A good way to fix that is to add some transparency. :)
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Hi Sarah:)
I love your second set! I really like the map and how you organized everything. The button earth is little hard to read, and I would play with color or image. Nice job!
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I think both of your designs are an improvement over their current site, but I think I love the second one better! I love the way you work with white backgrounds and simple line drawings. Genius!
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I like your white designs a bit more. I like the background on the other ones however I am getting lost with what I'm supposed to be looking at. I think the white designs are easier to use and still show the purpose of the site.
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Hi Sarah!

I really like your second set of designs, I would recommend playing with different fonts instead of sticking to the same one for everything tho. Your photos are great!! Nice job.
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Big_DaDdy
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Post by Big_DaDdy »

Hi Sarah, I like layout two. I enjoy the outlined Tahoe illustration and background image. I don't know about your typeface, it's very sharp, rebel-ish for the type of tourist website that you are going for. It's headed in a good direction but I think it needs a bit more development, I don't get that website feel just yet, more like a map of some sort. Hope this helps, good work :)
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Post by clawson »

I like both designs. The photo, to me, would be a bigger appeal to the target audience while the other design although very attractive and artsy look doesn't scream adventure as much. Both are great good job.
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Post by matt »

I like the layout . the first better than the second but would change the font types to something more expressive. Good work!
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