project 3 prelim

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clawson
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project 3 prelim

Post by clawson »

Here are my roughs, let me know how I can improve these, thanks
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I think I like the second designs better because they seem more finished and clean cut than the other ones.
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what happened to your TMCC Logo? it looks like a Christmas tree.
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I prefer the design with the tmcc image! I think its more approachable and people like pictures haha, but maybe you can take or find a clearer image of tmcc, the overall graininess of these designs feels kind of 90's to me.
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The design TMCC image is cool, it works really well with the project. It's very easy to navigate too!
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Post by raton de biblioteca »

I like the second design it has a more distinctive color scheme. I would choose a san-serif for the body-copy because of the amount of words in the text. Sorry, the logo looks like GATM to me in the hierarchy.
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I really like the second designs more, the background on the first one just seems a bit too busy to me.
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I like your second design the best. The jewel tone colors are nice and the layout is easily navigated. The background of the other one is a little busy. Your TMCC logo looks distorted. :shock:
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I think that the second layout that you put together is stronger than the repeating image background one. I like the color scheme that you choose and i really like how you used the main center image to balance the layout. nice work!
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Post by Jones »

The computer picture designs are mah favs. They are easier for me to read and take in the infos. I like the color choices, the logo is fun too. The image is great and expansive. Good work.

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