Project 3 Roughs

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Big_DaDdy
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Project 3 Roughs

Post by Big_DaDdy »

Hello everyone! I wanted to create a duotone concept with my websites and keep things minimal. Enjoy!
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Re: Project 3 Roughs

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I like the first ones better. I like the use of the baby puke green and the over all feel of those ones. The orange ones kind of hurt my eyes a bit. Especially the inner pages.
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jason_hosier
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Re: Project 3 Roughs

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The first version is better. the green isn't so bad but the layout needs a little encouragement to lead the eye better.
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emilyduke
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Re: Project 3 Roughs

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I already let you know the green version is great! I like the minimalism with the bold image- I imagine a smaller more subtle nav that goes horizontal across the top right of the screen when I think of a minimal design and think that might balance your large type maybe?? In some ways the different bodies of type look slightly random.
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veronica chapman
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Re: Project 3 Roughs

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I love your duotone! I like the green and the purple but the green is probably more TMCC! your images are really nice also.

Drakula
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Re: Project 3 Roughs

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I love how colorful the second designs are, but I think the first ones work better for the project.
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kayla.pressburger
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Re: Project 3 Roughs

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I like your first set of designs! They’re clean and simple and get straight to the point. You may consider putting a color behind your bodycopy to make it easier to read, or lowering the opacity of your background image. Nice work!
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Re: Project 3 Roughs

Post by raton de biblioteca »

I like the green design.....Watch out for the color blind colors!
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evexhouses
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As you already know, the first ones are my favorite! They are super cool, you just need to make that text stand out a bit more.
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Re: Project 3 Roughs

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tough choice, both really original looks. I think I like the orange one best. The only minor thing I see is the smaller text is tough to read on some.
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