Project 1 Prelim

[Tickosity]

I like your mobile #1 and your computer #2. I think the mobile one works with drawing the eye and with just enough going on but not distracting. I think the computer #2 is more successful with making a simple and professional site.

[Jaime Ramey]

Hi there,
I really like the illustration of the girl. Maybe you can somehow add it in your design with your picture. Maybe make your picture a little small and add a pop up button for your art. Maybe?
Jaime