So here s my final webpage....for now. Im happy with how it turned out but it still needs some work.
http://www.grc175.com/student/fall-2019 ... n-stetina/
I was able to get everything where i wanted it too and my images look great. Although when you play with the browser size it tends to break.
Project 2 Final Critique
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Project 2 Final Critique
Taylor Von Stetina
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Hi Taylor,
Very nice! It follows your great project 1 design very well. You may want to add a bit more margin above the TMCC logo.
Excellent work!
Very nice! It follows your great project 1 design very well. You may want to add a bit more margin above the TMCC logo.
Excellent work!
Nalani Nickles
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Hey Taylor,
Nice work turning your initial design into your webpage. The final result looks very very similar to your project 1 final. I do miss the cute email icon that was in the left-hand corner though.
Nice job!
Nice work turning your initial design into your webpage. The final result looks very very similar to your project 1 final. I do miss the cute email icon that was in the left-hand corner though.
Nice job!
Kaitlin Wallberg
“I don't know half of you half as well as I should like; and I like less than half of you half as well as you deserve.”
― J.R.R. Tolkien, The Fellowship of the Ring
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IarF06JKANg
“I don't know half of you half as well as I should like; and I like less than half of you half as well as you deserve.”
― J.R.R. Tolkien, The Fellowship of the Ring
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IarF06JKANg
Re: Project 2 Final Critique
Hi Taylor,
You did a great job on your website! The sizing is good and I like the imagery you used. Good job!
You did a great job on your website! The sizing is good and I like the imagery you used. Good job!
Katelyn R. Brooke
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Good job translating your Project One design over to a real live website, Taylor. It's looking quite strong.
All the strengths of your Project One are here. You've got your fantastic background image and your header and footer acting as great frames for your content. Your typography is really working. The sans-serif type serves to modernize the whole thing wile the eye is drawn to your serif title type. Your navigation is easy to see and use. Your composition works well with your imagery. Mostly by staying out of their way and letting them do the heavy lifting when it comes to color and texture.
Unfortunately, it's also inherited some of the margin and alignment issues, especially the right edge between your navigation, title, and body copy container. You probably could have gotten away with being a little more transparent with your body copy container. Also, the margin at the top of the TMCC logo is awfully tight.
Nicely done!
All the strengths of your Project One are here. You've got your fantastic background image and your header and footer acting as great frames for your content. Your typography is really working. The sans-serif type serves to modernize the whole thing wile the eye is drawn to your serif title type. Your navigation is easy to see and use. Your composition works well with your imagery. Mostly by staying out of their way and letting them do the heavy lifting when it comes to color and texture.
Unfortunately, it's also inherited some of the margin and alignment issues, especially the right edge between your navigation, title, and body copy container. You probably could have gotten away with being a little more transparent with your body copy container. Also, the margin at the top of the TMCC logo is awfully tight.
Nicely done!
"Inspiration is for amateurs. The rest of us just show up and get to work." — Chuck Close
Michael Ganschow-Green - GRC 175 Instructor
mganschow@tmcc.edu | 673-8200 ext.5-2173
Michael Ganschow-Green - GRC 175 Instructor
mganschow@tmcc.edu | 673-8200 ext.5-2173
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Hi Taylor! your website looks wonderful the fonts look great!
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Sandra Martinez
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Sandra Martinez
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Your site uses great images. I hope that it interactive works for you. I think it's a great layout.
Tandy G
GRC 175, Web Design and Publishing I, Fall 2019
Truckee Meadows Community College
GRC 175, Web Design and Publishing I, Fall 2019
Truckee Meadows Community College
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Hey Taylor, your website looks pretty cool, it give me a sense of calmness with the whole tree thing you got going on. Your navigation looks clean. I do think that you could have done something to stylized your name. Actually, I think the typeface you got for your name right now fits for some reason, I cannot explain lol maybe just increase the size. Great Job!
~ Jessie Alanis
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Your site looks awesome. I like how you arranged the elements of your website and your background image.
- Ryan Vellinga