Project 1 Preliminary

[Hamistani]

Hello Katherine,
I really like the second layout! The background image gives the whole composition the perfect amount of color. I also like how balanced everything is. If it were me, I think the white stands out too much, so I would change the boxes to a darker gray, so they don't look out of place. Overall, great job, I am looking forward to seeing the final result!

[rmepinero]

Hiya Katherine!

Wow I really love the background images you used! They have so much depth and they’re very detailed and interesting but they don’t take away from browsing your content. As for the first design, I think you could fill up the space a bit more, whether that be adding more text or making your profile photo and name a bit bigger. In the second one, I think I would just make the “Home” and “About” buttons a bit smaller so there’s margin and white space around them. Otherwise, both look really good and are very clean and organized!

[dearangela]

Hey Katherine,

I like your second design! The green leaves feel fresh white your white overlay on top. I think your buttons can be enhanced with maybe the shape of the leaves? Or maybe an oval, not sure but I think something like that might match more with your entire background. Nice job!

[IzzyB]

Hi Katherine,

I would go with the second design. The use of the plant image is really good and fits well with the black that you have. The biggest thing that can make this design even better is playing with type and choosing different fonts. Maybe something expressive for your name? Like handwritten, cursive or a thin font for your name would be great.

[comicsansfanclub]

Hi Katherine,
Very cool designs! I like the leaf one the best! the colors are so pretty and it looks very professional and easy to navigate. I agree with many of these comments about experimenting with more expressive type. I think it would really give it an even more personalized look to your website. Nice job! excited to see what cool things you add to your website!

[MatthewCS]

Hey Katherine,
I like your second concept with the leaves as your background, I think you should extend the border that has your name on it all the way to the edges on the left and right sides, I think that'll make the design look better. You could also make the border with the body text and files a darker color and make the text white instead.
Overall I agree with you that you can do a lot of experimenting with this concept and it's a nice job!