Project 3 preliminary

[angelraiders]

Here are my roughs for preliminary critique. Same concept with different layouts. Let me know what you think.

Here are the other pair, which I like more and i think would work better.

[cheyanne]

I like the second one, the color scheme is really cool and I like where the navigation is.
However the banner/header looks just a little bit too big.

[sktlz1965]

cheyenne you were reading my mind cuz that exactly what I am thinking to, make the header smaller, OR maybe overlap it onto the box below so its not as heavy and bulky up at the top. I think the organization on the second one is cool, and interesting yet works really well.

[R3YNO]

I agree with Faith and Cheyenne's comments on the size of the banner it should be smaller, however I see no reason why you cant have it full size on the home page like in the second design...

[trisa_lunstrum]

your typography is very cool, I actually like your first design, especially the secondary pages, it looks more dynamic and maybe a little less cluttered

[artgalstyle]

Can I say I like them all and can't you use all of them. All four of your designs are awesome.

Laramie

[Alaxvong]

Very neat typography. I would go with the second design. The layout has more visual interest.

[thusers]

the typography is bad ass. how did you come up with it? very nice.

[jenny_snaza]

wowsa! I like the second one...though maybe the inner pages have a smaller header.

[deni]

I like them all! I am especially liking the first page with the large diagonal header. They are all colorful but not cluttered. Great job on the typography.

Denise