Project 1 (preliminary) Jenny Breitrick

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DustDjinn
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Re: Project 1 (preliminary) Jenny Breitrick

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The second webpage looks the most professional to me. Good use of color and I love the image you used.
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Juan Vazquez Lopez
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Re: Project 1 (preliminary) Jenny Breitrick

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Hello Jenny,
I Can say that your layouts are a reflection of you...well i do not know you to much but i think it is...anyways...I like better the second one...I do not know but the scheme color and the feeling in the layout itself makes me curious to know what is in it...I like the dominance that the pic have in the layout...i really like it... although your body copy is interesting your type face that you choose does not help to much. :( ..

Good job.
Juan Vazquez Lopez

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Siri
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Re: Project 1 (preliminary) Jenny Breitrick

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Jenny, I can definitely say that both of these designs reflect you very well, and if I had to choose one I'd go with the second. Not only does it incorporate an aspect very personal to you, that being your son, but the limited colour scheme works very well. One thing I'd recommend is making your 'Projects' and 'Inspirations' headers bigger – they're getting kind of lost there, and with your paragraph I wouldn't recommend going with a center alignment. Try justifying it, then adjusting justify so it is a center justify.
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mel_nunez
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Re: Project 1 (preliminary) Jenny Breitrick

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Hey Jenny, Both layouts are great. :D But I like the second version better :arrow: I like the image that you used of the little girl blowing a flower, this image feels like it connects everything in your design. Great job :!:
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I like both but I am more drawn to the 2nd design. The dandy lion being blown across the page creates some interesting flow. It make my eye go around the page. I really enjoy it. Im not sure what I would change. Good work!
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Dylan
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Re: Project 1 (preliminary) Jenny Breitrick

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I actually prefer the background images of the first, but the content box arrangement of the first. Either way they are both pretty rad.
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