project#1 index page redux

[campbell_mckeogh]

ok I messed around with some images and stuff,

[jennybreitrick]

very cool-

[re8ecca]

I really like this Campbell. The only thing I would suggest is to mask out some of the texture on the menu options and project links. I want to see them stand off the background just a tad more. I think your placement of the illustration in the background is perfect. Those glasses are like your personal icon. Very cool.

[rmosley]

I agree with Re8ecca on making the type stand out more by masking the texture in the background. But good job, I love the colors and the play-on CMYK with CMCK. Looks awesome!

[Heyyou]

Campbell,

I agree with Rachel and Rebecca on the texture. Your use of color helps your nav menu stand out from your background, but the texture really pushes it back. The layout looks great and the color scheme is working well together.

Aharon

[campbell_mckeogh]

no worries will tone it down a bit

[donnalouwho]

Hey Campbell,
Nice redux! I really prefer this to your other. I do like the texture but would have to agree that it's a bit hard to read your text. Other than that, nice job!

[nunezm]

Hi Campbell,
The background image is great I like it. One thing I suggest doing is maybe change the text for the about me I personally are having a hard time reading it. Excellent job on the layout.

[I'mNicole]

Heya Campbell.

Awesome revisions! The background image is interesting without being overwhelming and the play on color is great. Like everyone else, I do find the texture a little overwhelming in places, and I would definitely increase the size of your "Who I am?" section to make it more readable. But that makes me curious too, because you have a link that says "Who am I?" so is it going to be an anchor link and just take you to that little section on your homepage?

[OliviasMama12]

Very nice job. Love the color scheme.