C.J.Norris_project2drafts

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gokudera08
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C.J.Norris_project2drafts

Post by gokudera08 »

here are the jpgs for the fixing of the website the original web address is bbtactics.com if you wish to see if then see my reworks. this is a site for information so i just wanted it to intresting to the people seeing the site. as for the game the main things to know are its basically a fantasy so thing WoW or Lord of the Rings and such then football based on dice.
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Hi CJ - I think you've chosen a tough one here, because their current site isn't all that bad, although I agree that it could be more interesting.

To make this work, I'd suggest staying away from a monochromatic color scheme. I don't think it provides enough interest in this case. I think you need some complimentary colors to play with. Also, I'd recommend finding two typefaces that contrast each other - like you did in your second concept.
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jennybreitrick
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I love your use of color in both layouts! It would be fun to see the imagery that you are going to use.
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Clean, nice looking layouts. Nothing is overdone. Good job CJ!
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Hi C.J,
I like better the first concept because the typeface and the hierarchy that you use on it helps a lot. Good job
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Post by mel_nunez »

hello C.J. I agree with Rebecca you pick a hard one.. but overall i think you are going to a good direction i personally like the first version the big headline is grabbing my attention and makes me stay on the page to look for something investing.
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Post by Heyyou »

C.J.,

I like the second layout better because of the interesting typeface you used for the headline and I think the green works better as a color scheme. I would really like to see more imagery because visuals help people understand where they are very quickly. These are a nice start.

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Post by OliviasMama12 »

Hi C.J.!

Well I am leaning toward the orange website- it must be the colors or something but they are really jumping out at me! When you throw the imagery in there it should all come together nicely!
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Hi C.J,

I'm leading towards more the green color scheme. I also like the typeface. Since the original site is about games this site looks like a game site which is great! Nice Job :D
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Hi Cj,

It's so awesome that you enjoy using bright colors, a lot of people are nervous to do that! I prefer the second one as the type is a bit more creative. I also agree with Rebecca, the primary color is good but I think it does need a contrasting color to help make things stand out a little more. Coming along very well, though! Can't wait to see it all finished. :)
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