Hi, guys.
This is the awful website that I`ve chose. http://www.pennyjuice.com/htmlversion/home.htm
Ant these is my two different versions of roughs for home and content page.
I was trying to stick with the design for kids and that rainbow theme.
Which one do u like better?
Thanks.
Project 2 first critique - Alexey Makovskiy
Re: Project 2 first critique - Alexey Makovskiy
Hi Alexey - I am completely drawn to your second set of roughs. I love the masthead, with the rainbow giving it some dynamic action, and I love the illustration of the kid in the juice stand. It sure kicks the ass of the original concept on their current site. At this point I can't even think of a way to improve it. I think it's really solid. Nice work.
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Re: Project 2 first critique - Alexey Makovskiy
looks awesome so fun and colorful.
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Re: Project 2 first critique - Alexey Makovskiy
Wow Alexey! I am in love with the layout of both pages! The colors and imagery that you chose are working wonderful together. You really set the mood for the audience.
jen
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jenny breitrick
Re: Project 2 first critique - Alexey Makovskiy
hey Alexey!! good job with both of your layouts i like both. the use of the colors and the cartoon imagery attracts the attention from you target audience. Keep working hard...
Jose nunez
Re: Project 2 first critique - Alexey Makovskiy
Alexey,
Both of your layouts work very well. I am drawn to the imagery of the second layout because I love the idea of the "lemonade stand". My only suggestion is to make sure to put your copy into columns. Line lengths of copy that long tend to mess with the natural pace of reading. Very good work.
Aharon
Both of your layouts work very well. I am drawn to the imagery of the second layout because I love the idea of the "lemonade stand". My only suggestion is to make sure to put your copy into columns. Line lengths of copy that long tend to mess with the natural pace of reading. Very good work.
Aharon
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Aharon Williams
Aharon Williams
Re: Project 2 first critique - Alexey Makovskiy
Hi Alexey,
The redesign of the original site is Great!. Its interesting to look at and the information easy to find. I like color scheme. The images used are great specially the (lemon stand) Awesome layout
The redesign of the original site is Great!. Its interesting to look at and the information easy to find. I like color scheme. The images used are great specially the (lemon stand) Awesome layout
Maria Nunez
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Hi Alexey!
Well I think I enjoy the second layouts more, just because the kids lemonade stand is a great idea! It would be cool if there was some way you could integrate the navigation onto the lemonade stand sign!
Well I think I enjoy the second layouts more, just because the kids lemonade stand is a great idea! It would be cool if there was some way you could integrate the navigation onto the lemonade stand sign!
Nicole Medrano
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Re: Project 2 first critique - Alexey Makovskiy
Love your designs, Alexey! They both look awesome but I love the second design best. It feels very complete and ready to go!
Donna Harn
Re: Project 2 first critique - Alexey Makovskiy
Alexey you do a great job every single time. I enjoy both but I feel you have a stronger case for the second layout. It works perfectly and you should be proud.
Dustin Hill