Project 3 prelim cjn

[gokudera08]

here are my 2 designs for the tmcc website. please leave your feedback below ^_^.

[jennybreitrick]

CJ-try reposting these..cuz I think there is something wrong with the link to them

[mawpe]

I'm not sure how to critique these because both of them are the same with the exception of the colors. I like the idea of keeping things clean in your design. Some additional imagery would really increase the look of your roughs. I noticed some spelling errors, so you may want to use spell check to avoid those.

[I'mNicole]

Heya C.J.

I'm going to ditto what Mark said, in that they're the same design with different colors. It'd be nice to see more variety and you stretching your boundaries a bit more. I'd definitely include some pictures and graphics to spruce it up, and also find a way to blend the TMCC logo better so it doesn't have that tacky white background.

[Juan Vazquez Lopez]

Hey C.J,
Well, I do not now, your designs looks simple and similar, perhaps some images could help or some interesting crazy type in the header.

[re8ecca]

Hi CJ - These are too basic, although it does create a framework for you to start from. I will echo what has already been said -- this desperately needs images and typography.

[donnalouwho]

hard to say, needs a few more elements! maybe some cool images and some contrasting typography?

[Justin Hubert]

Hi Cj, i think that your color choices are a little too neon. They make the design feel like you were limited to just blue and green. I would try using type that isn't the same color as the background.

[DustDjinn]

um, I think blue is the better color.

[Alexey M]

I like the blue one better. Like the simplicity. Wish to see more elements, like images and stuff.