Project #3 Preliminary Critique REVISIED

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Alexey M
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Im not sure about the second one, bt first design look cool and interesting. I think a couple more improvements and will look awesome.
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i like how you illustrated alot of your graphic elements

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I"m also liking the first set of roughs, not only does it incorporate a number of elements that we use every day for our program, but it catches the eye while also presenting a casual atmosphere, which is something that's important for our group and building relationships. And it looks similar to Ron's website as well.

There's a bit too much white space going on, but it shouldn't be hard to fix and clean up. You're off in a good direction!
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I love the idea of the first layout! but would love to see the computer feel more of the screen. Awesome!
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Maria,

I think the first layout is a great visual concept. I would work with the size and scaling, and as Rebecca mentioned,the perspective of the objects on the desk. Good job.

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Sorry, my feedback is going to be completely unhelpful.
I really like the computer screen as a container. Go with that one.

The second layout just doesn't grab me.
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