Nicole Hicks, Project Three Preliminary

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nunezm
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Re: Nicole Hicks, Project Three Preliminary

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Hi Nicole,
You have amazing roughs! I'm leading more towards your first set of layout it's more organized and its easier to navigate through. Great Job!!
Maria Nunez

campbell_mckeogh
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LOVE the painted drip pies

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Siri
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I have to say that your second one is very exciting and catches the attention well! Though you might want to reconsider your text decorations, it's a bit hard to read and as Dan has beat into us all many times, typography is important.
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freem110
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The second layout is awesome! So unique and different, well done!
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Hi Nicole!

Yes I definitely think I like the more colorful layout. But the circles might be throwing me off just a little- maybe they are "competing" too much with your colorful header graphic?
Nicole Medrano
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Heyyou
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Nicole,

The color splash concept works quite well. I would agree with Rebecca that giving your headline some equal weight by making it a bit more legible will help. Very nice.

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Landsknecht
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Totally torn between the excellent choices! I like the structure of the first layout, but not the colors. I really like the design of the artsy one, but I have no idea how you're gonna make it work. Great job, I like surprises!
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