Updated! Project #3 - Preliminary Roughs, Donna Harn

[Alexey M]

After you updated your second design, it turned out just awesome! Great colors and composition!

[nunezm]

Hi Donna,
Both of your rough came out great. I like them both. My personal favorite is the second I really like the images being used and the I really like the redo design!! The color choice is great.

[campbell_mckeogh]

great layout work for the second one like the header image

[OliviasMama12]

Hi Donna-

I really like your second design more because I think it is very clear to understand and nicely presented, and your redesign EVEN more after you've slightly tweaked to color scheme! You are on a great path- keep it up!!!

[Siri]

Donna,

Though the home page of your first rough really caught my attention, the layout of the second one works better and after seeing your redesign I'm looking forward to how much further you take it. It still seems a bit too tight, or closed in, but so far so good. Perhaps consider using a sans-serif font for your headers as well?

[freem110]

I like the second layout and love the revised colors for it. It looks great!

[Heyyou]

Donna,

I like your updated roughs the best. The color scheme works really well and it give you some room to move around content. Very nice start.

Aharon

[Landsknecht]

Great job. I must apologize for giving unhelpful late feedback.

I really like both layout ideas. The second layout (non-computer) has more visual interest in these roughs.