Final submission for project one

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KamiGurl
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Re: Final submission for project one

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Awesome job on your final project! I love how you incorporated who you are on your webpage. It is different than most and I love the overall feel it has going for it!
~Kami

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gr8ful1
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I think you did a great job combining both of your designs into one. It is very readable and the layout is good, and the use of personal images and fonts gets your points across very well without looking cluttered.
Kirsten Sorensen

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Now this is a nice, clean design. I like what I see, Gwendolyn.

You've got a clean simple layout going here and it's working pretty well. I like the large image header up top. You've done a nice job of reinforcing the colors you established in the top photo with the colors in the rest of the composition. The medium blue background color in particular seems to go well with everything. I like the pacific northwest Native American theme you established. Margins are generally good throughout the composition. Your type and imagery are well placed. All in all, a decent little composition.

I think it has about a font too many though. I'd have used either the font in your title or the font in your header for your navigation. I'd also have added a little more margin to your navigation as well. It's a little narrow at the moment.

Good effort.
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ariaaearnest
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Hey Gwen! (if it's alright with you to shorten your name like that.)

Great job! I love how your final design turned out. I feel like it has a lot of personality and it really tells us about you as a person. The only thing I'm noticing that's missing is your contact button. Other than that great job!
Aria Earnest

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I really liked that you put all of your personality into your webpage. I feel like I have and idea of your back ground and what is important to you and I really enjoy your use of negative space.
Kaylyn Dazey
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