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Re: Final Rough
Posted: Fri Oct 13, 2017 11:06 pm
by Marco_Horta1
Hi Zera,
I like the modification you have done to your website, your color selections are now better and your texts boxes look more attractive than the previous page, great job. just keep the paragraph about yourself towards a bit higher position.
Re: Final Rough
Posted: Mon Oct 16, 2017 8:12 am
by Jose_M
Zera-Chann,
This one is cool and fun to look at. The only things to improve are aligning your bottom right text with the pink containment box and the bottom left content with the links (blue boxes).
Re: Final Rough
Posted: Mon Oct 16, 2017 10:51 am
by breezy
Like your colors and layout, I would change the kerning in your body copy so the type is closer together, right now its halting to read.
Re: Final Rough
Posted: Mon Oct 16, 2017 12:48 pm
by Pearl_Underwood
I really like this. Gives a warm, relaxed feeling. The colors are great. simple design, yet very affective. Good job!
Re: Final Rough
Posted: Mon Oct 16, 2017 9:15 pm
by chaytothet
Very nicely done!
Simple, but with the added detail you are talking about I feel like it will totally pull everything together
Agree with the type choice in the body copy though, a color change would really help it stand on it's own as a design element.