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Re: Project 1 Final

Posted: Thu Oct 11, 2018 11:22 pm
by kj923
I like how you were able to incorporate your passion into your design!

I would like to suggest playing with your rule of thirds for your mobile design, it feels a little top heavy

Re: Project 1 Final

Posted: Fri Oct 12, 2018 5:06 pm
by evexhouses
I love the colors! And everything is so "techy" i really like your design! Your photo should be a bit bigger and your name too!!

Re: Project 1 Final

Posted: Fri Oct 12, 2018 6:06 pm
by hiitsyuri24
Hi Dana! I really like your background and colors. Great job!

Re: Project 1 Final

Posted: Fri Oct 12, 2018 6:26 pm
by raton de biblioteca
The clean lines draw my eye to the background layout more than the body-copy. I love the fonts for the navigation, but I agree with the name size. Your name should be like up to 11. Or perhaps make the other background color more transparent?

Re: Project 1 Final

Posted: Fri Oct 12, 2018 7:28 pm
by giusti56
I like the background image and the colors and feel it brings to the design, I still think the type could use a better font choice though.

Re: Project 1 Final

Posted: Fri Oct 12, 2018 8:17 pm
by Big_DaDdy
Hi Dana, looks good. I think you have a bit of empty space that you can use to spread things around to create a visual hierarchy for your viewers. The drop shadow on your name and tabs make it a bit difficult to read especially with your background image.

Re: Project 1 Final

Posted: Fri Oct 12, 2018 8:31 pm
by veronica chapman
Love your background image! Love that you justified your body copy. My only suggestion is on your mobile version. You have a lot of unused space on the lower portion. You might want to arrange somehow so as not to have the imbalance.

Re: Project 1 Final

Posted: Sat Oct 20, 2018 8:24 pm
by tandyg
I'm not sure if I have commented. Just a little late here. I like the colors and balance with light opacity of the background compared to your vivid image. Neat concepts.