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Re: project I final / Agostina Renaud
Posted: Thu Oct 11, 2018 10:00 pm
by kj923
Agostina, I really like your final design! The placement and size of your name works really well and I love the contrast of the sunflower 
great job!!
Re: project I final / Agostina Renaud
Posted: Fri Oct 12, 2018 12:56 pm
by Instructor
Awwwwwww! A sunflower. Is that an autobiographical photo there.
You've got a really interesting background texture here. Vertically, it looks like wet paint. Horizontally, it looks like rippling water. The whole design has a clean artsy feel to it, like an art gallery or an upscale sandwich shop. You've made great use of whitespace to open it up. The container really looks like a sheet of paper. Good work with the drop shadow to add depth too. Your type is well chosen. I like the combination of the sans-serif type with the super artsy serif type. Nice use of positioning with your title name too. Hanging it out of the edge of your container really adds a little extra visual interest.
I think your bodycopy font is a little bold. A thinner/lighter version of the typeface would not have been as dominant. Probably could have used a little tighter leading too. On your phone design, your bottom navigation is a little closer to the left than the right.
Great job!
Re: project I final / Agostina Renaud
Posted: Fri Oct 12, 2018 4:51 pm
by evexhouses
I absolutely love the way that your name overlaps with the background shape, it gives it a sense of dimension. And I really like your minimalism here, great job.
Re: project I final / Agostina Renaud
Posted: Fri Oct 12, 2018 7:05 pm
by raton de biblioteca
The texture of the font goes really well with the background texture! I agree that using a less bold choice would be more easy to read, but I think that it is a really strong choice considering the cohesive nature that it brings with the background making the design more three-dimensional. I love the spacing of each of the pieces of the layout.
Re: project I final / Agostina Renaud
Posted: Fri Oct 12, 2018 7:06 pm
by Stasiavous
I love your layout! The simplicity is awesome and your typeface choice is so pleasing. Great job!
Re: project I final / Agostina Renaud
Posted: Fri Oct 12, 2018 7:36 pm
by giusti56
This is one of my favorite designs. I like the bright color of the flower with the whole composition and how well it flows with everything.
Re: project I final / Agostina Renaud
Posted: Fri Oct 12, 2018 7:38 pm
by Big_DaDdy
Love it, love it, love it.
Great background image and great sunflower shoot.
Clean look and feel. Great job Agostina! Menea, menea!
Re: project I final / Agostina Renaud
Posted: Fri Oct 12, 2018 7:47 pm
by veronica chapman
Nice! Simple and pretty. You might try a different alignment on your body copy.
Re: project I final / Agostina Renaud
Posted: Fri Oct 12, 2018 8:11 pm
by Jaime Ramey
Hi Agostina,
I really like your design especially the sunflower. Its really nicely done.
Great job!
Jaime