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Re: Project 1 Final

Posted: Thu Oct 11, 2018 10:13 pm
by kj923
April! I really love your color pallet! and your web layout works very nicely.

In your mobile design, I like how you used a plain neutral color to expand your background image. One thing I would suggest is to focus on your rule of thirds. It feels too centered and might look better if there were some different sizes going on :)

Really great work!!

Re: Project 1 Final

Posted: Fri Oct 12, 2018 4:12 pm
by Big_DaDdy
love, love, love the feel of your photo! Very clean and professional.
The only suggestion would be to make the email, GRC info smaller--like fine print--so that it doesn't take attention away from your overall composition. Nicely done.

Re: Project 1 Final

Posted: Fri Oct 12, 2018 4:15 pm
by evexhouses
I really like your designs! They look very professional and they are easy to understand. I do think you should make your name a bit bigger but other than that Awesome Job!!

Re: Project 1 Final

Posted: Fri Oct 12, 2018 4:57 pm
by hiitsyuri24
I like that look really clean and smart. I also like that image and the colors that you chose!

Re: Project 1 Final

Posted: Fri Oct 12, 2018 6:48 pm
by raton de biblioteca
This is super fun! I didn't even think to place text vertically!!! This is a great choice! Especially emphasizing thinking outside of the box-super punny! The only thing that is bothering me is the text, I think you are quoting something? Maybe make it more obvious otherwise the personal pronoun use seems too irregular and distracting for what you want to portray.

Re: Project 1 Final

Posted: Fri Oct 12, 2018 6:56 pm
by veronica chapman
I like the feel of your site. My one suggestion, I believe your name should be larger than your navigation buttons with a more readable script.

Re: Project 1 Final

Posted: Fri Oct 12, 2018 7:13 pm
by Stasiavous
I adore the changes you made to your layout! The background is perfectly professional and inspiring. Great job!

Re: Project 1 Final

Posted: Fri Oct 12, 2018 7:41 pm
by giusti56
Hey, I really like your composition and how it kinda portrays the image of a designer. It has good colors and the page flow is really nice.

Re: Project 1 Final

Posted: Fri Oct 12, 2018 8:18 pm
by Jaime Ramey
Hi April,
I really like the feel of your design.
Nice Job,
Jaime